If willow has been with Sam, dean, and John since she was 4 then what about periods like how would they handle that (I just imagine them all screaming thinking she is possessed

Love this story. thank you for sharing it !

this would be better if he didnt call her a war goddess thats cheesy as fuck do u read ur fics like damn

You had me at 'smut warning'.

I tottes loooooooooove Cass , so I definently luv yur story

This looks like a great story I'm excited there are like no cas/ OCs out there.

Good god, how much suspence are you making. I'm on the edge of my fucking seat,mate. :-) can't say I blame you; the more suspence the more I'll want to read

You are a great writer, I wanted to say this to you even thought It's 2013 and you wouldn't see the review.

Girlll you DO know how to keep someone on the edge of their seat. And I recommend you work on the summary, maybe you'll have more views and reviews :-)

None of your chapters are bad in any way...They are more like GOOD in everyone way. Trust me I have read some bad fan-fiction and this isn't one of them. Stop beating yourself over how short or ''bad'' you think the chapters are. Even if the chapters ARE short there IS a saying that says sometimes less is more.

Alright, just a few things to say and then I'm off to the sequel!

The first thing I have to mention - and I literally mean HAVE TO - is the British slang and whatnot. I'm assuming you're from across the pond, but I'm not sure if you meant for Willow to be... Either way, it showed in the story.

The second thing I have to say is that I got slightly confused at parts. My biggest suggestion for you is to work on your formatting a little bit. It wasn't horrible, but people tend to find things more enjoyable and easier to read when organization is at its best.

And, the last thing I have to mention is some of the cheesy, fluffy bits. They're not bad, but you did have a lot of them. Still, it's nice to read those sometimes, and you're were wonderful!

Now onto the good parts!

Your plot line was superb! Really, I loved the idea of a girl carrying Lucifer's grace! And, due to the fact that they never touched it during the show, it was a very realistic idea.

Anyways, I really did enjoy this. I've been looking for a decent Castiel/OC fic for a couple of weeks. There are hardly any out there, and only a handful of them are good. And THANK YOU for not making Willow Dean and Sam's ACTUAL sister. Oh, there are SO many of those...

Anyways, I've been droning on and on, haven't I? I'll be moving on now. Great work!

Poor Willow, trying to commit suicide, she needs to be reunited with Cas and quick! I hope she will have Cas and maybe a little Cas to make her happy and strong soon!

Feeling very special! Pleas bring back Cas! Willow needs Cas! They still haven't been on their honeymoon or had a very happen start to their married life.

Poor Cas, what happened? I liked that Willow was able to take control back and how you did described the possession!

Yay, Catiel is going to save the day, Willow will be back and making Castiel "feel" in no time!