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![]() ![]() ![]() It's done? O_O |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm seriously loving this so far. You write Sakura so well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely lovely! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kay, so I like this... I have no idea why exactly, it's hard to pinpoint specifics. Just, it's well written and... I think I just like everything. Yeah, that works. EVERYTHING is cool. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful and incredibly touching! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. I really do. It's so descriptive, enough that you don't always have to explain a situation entirely, because you can rely on the reader's humanity to fill in the blanks. It's a form of writing that's very difficult to master, and it's impressive. I love the line, "Who would want to touch the ground, when they could race across the sky?" The actual words are so much richer than what can be found often in mediocre writing, and they seem to blend together and create this beautiful image in the mind. If there's one critique I have, it's that I wish this story could have been longer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() One of my favorite Naruto stories! (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter! (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() One of my favorite chapters. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely chapter! (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such an emotional chapter. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter! :) |
![]() ![]() Love that you use Relient K songs as chapter titles. The song is insanely appropriate. Although you end the story kind of abruptly, it feels unfinished. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sorry, my last review was incomplete because I accidentally hit 'send review'...anyways... I'd like to ask for your permission to take small bits of the story and because I'm inspired by this story I'd like to make a similar plot :3 I don't write here, but I do on wattpad . :) I'm not using the Naruto characters but I only want the plot, well not an exact copy of it, only for the first few parts. Thank you. This story is very morbid but it's genius. Love is hinted subtly in a charming way :) please consider, and do PM me when you've come to a decision. |