You really should update and finish this it’s amazing

You know who I hate more then my boyfriend that cheated on me? It's people that stop writing in the middle of a story! I hope that you enjoy this review! You asked for it! Bye biotch (bitch). Hope you have a wonderful Life

AHHHH WHAT!? IT ENDS LIKE THAT AND HASNT BEEN UPDATED IN 5 YEARS, NOOOOOOOO

PLEASE update and I want edward and bella to be together

And you are my favorite author

Great story. Will it ever be finished? You stopped at the best part.

Please write more it's going to kill me not knowing how it ends with Bella and Edward.

12.
Chapter 12
Bella's pov my own coldest eyes neweeded to hunt People Cullens you with me with tith allies we are going hunting it is people then all the Sudden wearing my Dress and Swen blackest cloaks then all the Sudden all was pure CHAOS And Had them as very all of them and then MURDERED them as very all of them and the walloping of all of Greenish blood and then with them as very all of the Newspapers suddenly cursed the Volturi having no seeds and reported a serious crime killing a ancient Extraterrestrial race were the Vulcans all the Sudden the Volturi guard all of them Killed us then had us Murdered with Irina killed she never survived added Garret with the former nomads with the Pack and then all the sudden broken free from the bodies who took the corpses away and Cursed them with out Seeds at all they vanished their mission was very completely mission and reentry they have broken our law and they are deceased but Esvcaped withy her best friends all of the killed and murdered and from their own bodies what was do with then Acid lead chemo them thin drain cremate then Wax then her broth used his fingers using his brain of his it was too late we died afterwards then all the sudden Resurrected as Kindred and Interplanetary Lycans and their young then with as very all of the allies with mates and shifters evolved and then my new hair was longer with bangs adopted a daughter named Reneesme Carie Cullen changed my new last name to Cullen we were a very fiercer but strongest coven so my best friends as well adopted teenage children were from us and their seeds and we unification of our covens but lost Hulien and Johan killed and their ororaned sibes who were adopted and who gained adoptee children declaring all scale martial law declaring ourserlelves as a new race of our own but our bodies were urned but iciest but flamed had brand new unbreakable skin we were not dying but never lived at all as the years whizzed fly by it was 2014 I was 187 years old looked young as a spring chicken but my body was adult had more stylish clothes dressed in desiger clothes Rose loved my bangs never grown back and golden eyes and cold skin so my best friends went to the church we were infertile I was a Wife he was a Commander we now ruled Washington for many years and yrars to go and we haven't age looking young and ripen they were furious of our coven looked but started to smell like onion ugh me asnd my big mouth got some skin lotions from their place your are wearing as very all layers phe-yew you do stink like a onion it changing us nope Mom! this is horrible we smell like Klingon women our cue to speed it's hunting season we are going to hunt differently then the Pack sighted us clad then it happened Jacob Imprinted on her my new daughter and it was too late could mate in heat and in season.

Why fid you end there. Noooooool

Wow, that was awesome

Why doesn't Bella tell him already?

Wow, that was intense

Love epov. If he knows he loves her, why isn't he doing something about it? Grrrrrr!

Bella's confession to Rosalie brought tears to my eyes

Why can't he remember her. Bella should leave

Why on earth would Bella go to live with them?