Try harder with your grammar. Seriously, it's impossible to read with the NEVER ending sentences. It's like, I looked at tamaki he is so nice he opened the door and walked in and all the girls looked at him im sure all of them like him. YOU NEED TO BREAK UP THE SENTENCES.

Nooooooo don't run

quote Madame Vastra "your grasp on biology worries me"

Um...one prob, dude: Tamaki's dad's name is Yuzuru lol not matt

Ella! My name is Ella! I really liked it will there be more!

to be honest it is really crappy. the proposal lacked detail, the sex was rushed, and theres no way in hell that you know you are pregnant the night after. I don't even think its possible to catch it that early. I don't know how old you are but if you're over the age of 15 may someone educate you. I know I sound like a jack ass but come on. If you think you're mature enough to write smut you need some work.

WOW
Did I read that correct the BABY is already KICKING...THEY BEARLY HAD SEX IN THE FIRST CHAPTER!THATS IMPOSSIBLE...they had sex already or TAMAKI WAS ASLEEP FOR 5 FULL MONTHS YOU TELL ME AND YOU KNOW CORRECT IT!

This is actually really good I hope you keep going:)

Awes! I want a baby Tamaki!

At least Ranka didn't try to kill Tamaki for now. Can't say the same for Tamaki's grandmother though please keep going on!

I'd be more afraid about what's gonig to happen when Haruhi's father finds out!

Aww poor peps! that must be hard to deal with that lol it toke me a minute to figure out that Matt was the dad lol

Keep writing plz!

I don't hate you. I'm just happy you finally updated! :D can't wait for the next chapter

Interesting start. I am very curios aout what will happen next