I loved this scene! It was so descriptive and poetic, especially when you described the coffee being poured. Great job.

Please post more! I love this! Brewster is fun to write for, isn't he? :) Keep up the good work!

Yes, I agree. _ It was really cute. I liked it a lot. Heheh...I remember trying to befriend Brewster when I first got the game, and I would visit the coffee shop EVERY day. XD I don't play that much anymore...

By the way, I didn't think it was choppy at all. You write well, and I love how descriptive your sentences are. Hope you do decide to add more to it. :-)

I LOVE THIS! It was so cute. You should add more chapters about how Brewster becomes happy with her visits, and they become good friends! XD I just really like this!