Awesome please continue

I love this! You capture the voices and mannerisms of the characters very well and there is a very nice flow to your writing. My one (minor) critique is with Alistair's character - according to his DA:O bio, he actually loves magic and hates that he was trained to be a Templar because that fact makes mages immediately distrust him. It is just apostates he is wary of.

I am aware that you haven't updated in over four years, but if you ever do consider continuing this you will have an eager reader!

Hello my friend! I have rather been enjoying the tale you have been spinning! You carry very high diction with very descriptive imagery. If I had any criticism to give, it would really only be one nitpick. You used repetition that wasn't really necessary. (" 'It's my turn'... It was Link's turn now.") Otherwise, what you have created is quite marvelous! I hope you write more at some point!

OMG I LOVE THIS!
Yes my comment is like two years later but I would love to be able to finish reading this story.
Not only that but I called my Human Nobel's Marbari 'Odin' too!
I also really like the way you did the whole, finding the dog thing. And I actually prefered it, i mean, Flemeth saved the Hero and Alistair by turning into a bird and carrying them out, did she save the dog too? Or did he follow her into the Wilds? But that wouldn't make sense as I'm pretty sure the darkspawn would have killed everyone.

LOVE the story...
Please start it up again?

I'm liking this so far; both Link and Aedan a bit of a flat personality so far, though in time I suppose they will be broadened. Also, it should be noted that the mabari has an unofficial-official name; Rabbit. The devs referred to him as such on the official forums. Hope to see more.

okay, this is good, but would it kill you to put in something like a divider or something to indicate whose perspective we are viewing the story from, its very confusing to me.

Awesome, can't wait!

Link is beast! please write more

A good story! The grammar and punctuation is impeccable and the characters are very well illustrated. I am hoping you are eventually going to have Morrigan and Link have a bit of romance going on between them. Both of them living near or in a forest for the majority of their lives, both have transformed into wolves multiple times, both are; in a way, outcasts in the area. One being an apostate and the other a foreigner. But with links friendly and outgoing personality and Morrigans cold and yet at times fiery personality seem to resonate quite well with one another. Would make an interesting romance imo.

The way you have Link is great. He is not a charismatic individual that has a way with words like he seems to have in many other Fanfics, and is instead has a preference for being alone while having trouble reading and understanding people. Yet is very aware, as he should be. And it is fine with him being the more skillful of the group after all that he has been through. He does have more experience than each of the members combined at this moment. And has received sword training from the Hero of time. If Alistiar and Aedan also use a sword and shield in combat it would be cool to see Link coaching them at times and sparing with them.

All in all this story is going along quite well. I just hope you continue with the story since it seems to have been a while since you last updated.

I really like the story, and I hope you update soon. I do have one question though, can Link still turn into a wolf, cause that would be awesome.

More! I demand more (please!) This was quite interesting to read! thanks

Its good mmkay. keep going mmkay.

Lol, this is a good fic. Keeping characters in...well character, and doing what you can with link is all good. If I had one complaint, it would be that I'm now in wanting of more. :p

I like how this story is coming along. Yea- Link did seem a bit powerful now that you mentioned it- though I liked his reaction when Morrigan used Fireball. XD

Great chapter & I'm happy for the quick update!

I think your doing a good job with link. I would personally try & make him more humble, but otherwise I like his character. & I'm glad Odin is here, ya for dog!

Great chapter & I'll be interested in seeing what link thinks about all the anti-elf stuff