really? you don't have time to finish this story. why?

wow I wish Arya won, everything was Eragon's fault I fucking hate Eragon, look at how many lives he ruined and now you side with him? This is like what happened with sloan only worse!

A shade can only be killed through a stab in the heart

What the heck was that. I have read a lot of messed up stuff but what?

WTF

I really like it, most Inheritance Cycle Fics are ExA, which I kind of hate. Also, another possible example of betrayal: how the twins said he knew how to use wards during the battle of farthen dur, when he actually didn't yet.

I hate it becuse you made it look like all of them betrayed eragon but in the real series this would be unthinkable and you made eragon look like a martyr. If you shall write something the at least write something that is thinkabl seriosly.? Eragon killing arya you must be kidding

This Fic has nearly as much character bashing as an HP Fic. I'd be very interested in how Eragon got his revenge.

fuckin sweet

Hmm, interesting. Im a big AxE fan but that was kinda cool. I like the new twist. I do think that Arya is WAY OOC but that is fine. Another cool twist is that you could have it be that Eragon is being manipulated and he only find out after his streak of revenge is over. Please excuse my lack of quotation and aquard flow of words, im currently typing this on a very cumbersome mobile device!

Ummm... I wonder what will happen if he DOES eat fat, juicy steaks in ellesmera...

Hmm I thought this was a very interesting take on a fanfic.. And I would love to see more of it!

It's good to see something not go Eragon's way all the time..

Also I would like you to post more about his revenge on people and getting a new dragon.. Everything seems quite out of character but that's to be expected with character bashing :) hope you do post more to this!

the story is actually pretty good, you managed to distort the story without messing up with everything, it's pretty good as a one-shot but could be the start of a serie

He should have found Murtagh... he was maybe the only person who didn't actually try to kill him... even when he was forced to fight the blue rider, they were supposed to take the pair alive.

I hate to see both brothers exiled and alone...

Plus, Saphira didn't try to kill him either...

They could all hang out together.

Happier... a bit anyways.

I am big eXa fan, but this fic is just perfect! You should definitely write more chapters, this has potential to be the ic version of "Dark Lord Harry Potter", Eragon as the Dark Lord,of course.

I will answer your questions as evil!protagonist fan.

Eragon should not get new love interest, he should get a harem, mainly because íf you write more chapters, Eragon would be evil or atleast dark and there are no harem fictions at the moment (atleast i havent found one).

Eragons dragon should be evil or atleast dark and- i hope -male.