I really love it

I really love you author. And that includes all of your pieces hehehe

I love this story. Reality with a mix of fantasies :D

this is one hell of a ride. and wonderful as always!

i really forget how long your chapter can get lol

Geez, I don't even remember half of these characters' details *insert crying laughing emoji here* but one thing I know is that your writing skill has improved tremendously!

I finished reading this, and I almost left without leaving a review— how could I when the Gakuen Alice fandom is dying and YOU GO AND FINISH SOMETBING AND A SEQUEL(which I will get to soon) IN 2017! Of all times! you really captured my attention with this story and I greatly appreciated the nuances of everyone’s relationships and everything felt very natural!
Going to read the sequel sort of scares me: I have mixed feelings about crossovers :O don’t get me wrong, I absolutely love CCS, but because I like Sakura and Mikan so much individually, them being in a story together and sharing the spotlight together is HARD bc I don’t want to favor one over the other and RIGHT MOW I favor Mikan bc hello the A Team was like all about her and so I want to read the rest of Mikan’s story, not Mikan and Sakura’s story!
But I will definitely read bc you left me wanting more! Plus I need to see Mikan and Natsume together :”””)

The best fanfiction i have read till now. U can convert it to a book. It will be good trust me.

I haven't read all of it yet, but there was no mention of how 'Polka' came about. From the time he cleaned her wound, maybe?

I like the story but sometimes i just get lost. It's like i can't cope with the time table, the cases or even how the flow would shift. But i guess i have to reread chapters again.

Omg noooo, this brings back so much memories...
I shipped Syaoran and Sakura so hard, it was my first official shipping when I first watched anime but now it is in the past...now it's all about Natsume and Mikan, - I love that pairing more now, I can never go back to Syaoran and Sakura after I discovered them ;; y u do this to me?! ;; it feels awkward reading SyaoranxSakura fanfics now...

Hello, I discovered your story yesterday, and it was so addicting I finished it today. I even created an account to express my love for it. The plot is just like, this is my favourtite kind of story line and it reminded me a little of Bones, the tv series, just in the team idea. I love the pairings and i especially love that Mikan is a kickass agent. The gakuen alice au just weaves itself perfectly and everything falls into place. What was even better was that, after I finished this and was looking foward ot the sequel ,i realised that sakura kinomoto the princess was SAKURA kinomoto like Clamp SAKURA KINOMOTO. words canno texpress how happy i am. like gakuen alice was like the bomb and then add in cardcaptorsakura, MY FAVOURITES. thank you for writing:) Im happily going on to the sequel. much love

Ooooooh Cardcaptor Sakura was my childhood! I ship Sakura and Syaoran so hard - but not as hard as Natsume and Mikan! So, what I'm deducing from this - not sure if it's right but... - is that Sakura is either out of double agenting the Alices but Mikan's still in there. So, she bands everyone together to get her back? Even if it's not, I'm excited! You're teaser set up was amazing too; saw it all play through my head - as always...T.T Save some talent for the rest of us!

Same errors as stated in my prior message.

HOLY FRIG NOT SATISFACTORY! It was so good though! Especially Natsume's, "I'll find you," oath at the end. It made my heart swoon - legit, swoon. I love it, I love it, I love it. Gimme some talent!

Throughout the story, you managed to maintain the air of suspense and intellect that's required for a spy story - awesome, awesome job! I can't put my praise into words right now (still a little shell-shocked and fan-girl-crazed over the ending).

As for a codename for Mikan, I thought of either chess pieces since it'd semi-relate to the princess theme or the 7 deadly sins (get it, cause they'd be deadly : )). She'd be one - wrath, greed, sloth, pride, lust, envy and gluttony. I'd either name her Envy or Pride. Envy since everyone envies her and pride since her pride of protecting her friends is the reason she's there. It'd be even cooler if you used their original forms (AKA what word they originated from in another language): wrath, avarita, sloth, prut, lust, invidia and gluttire. Some are the same as they originated in English but it's just an idea; you could even have them all in Spanish or French or something.

This story always makes me laugh! My favs: "Was he talking to Yuu or you?" and "You can have my Alice; no you take these two Alices, Luna can have another one and I'll take Youichi." Haahhahahahahahahahahaha golden! You should write a comedic series - if you haven't already.

You're plot development has been awesome too! Never once rushed, everything always planned out. It's wicked important to do research for these spy-techy type fics and I can tell you definitely did some. (Albeit, the green dot and red dot watch with windows was a bit confusing and I think it would've been better saying 'tracker' or something...) Awesome chapter as always though! I really love how it's progressed.

Few things:
1) 'Master' should only be capitalized when someone is addressing the master in a dialogue as they're using it as his name. So 'The Master' should be 'The master'. Same with 'elite' unless it was a title like, "The two Generals."
2) The beginning of a dialogue must always be capitalized - even if the dialogue tag (DT) before it ends in a comma.
3) Even if the dialogue ends with a '!' or a '?' but the DT is describing the dialogue, the beginning of the first word of the DT needs to not be capitalized. I know, that's confusing so here's where you did it and how you should do it from here-on-in: '"Almost?" The man lowly questioned.' Correction: '"Almost?" the man lowly questioned.' Even if it were, '"Go away!" she screeched," the 'she' needs to not be capitalized. Make sense?
4) I'll just PM you about your DT punctuation hahaha
5) Indenting after dialogue is spoken is usually the go-to. Unless the sentences relate directly to the speaker.
6) I found a few incorrect tense uses as in present tense when it should've been past and past when it should've been present.
7) Try to alter the first word of every sentence and also the sentence structures. By sentence structure I mean that instead of, "He walked away and sighed," you could say, "Sighing, he walked away." This just helps switch things up and not make the reading pattern boring (people actually subconsciously notice the pattern of writing).
8) Mikan and Youichi are rather OOC
9) Often times your sentences are a bit awkward and long. Try splitting them apart and rewording. If you can't reword a sentence to fit your liking, then delete it and find another approach to say the same thing. Also, while we're talking about sentences, each has to have a meaningful purpose. Don't put sentences in the story where they just follow routine and fill in space.
10) Show, don't tell. Instead of saying, "He was agonized," say, "His eyes crumpled as he barred his teeth, panting heated breaths. The boy rolled on his side, holding his wound and tucking his head into his neck."
11) There were some cases of basic carelessness. Like 'a surgical equipment' and the like so just proof read, proof read, proof read. Taking breaks that are days long help with the tediousness of it all.
12) Overall, don't use the same word repetitively too often in the same sentence. Use a thesaurus while re-editing if you need to.

You're writing style is so amazing, however, that it makes up for the errors you cause. I can still see the scenes you write out in my head. If a typo or confusing sentence pulls me out, I'm immediately able to fall back into the show you've set up. I don't know how you do it but I need lessons too! Awesome, awesome, awesome. The ending did me in :D

Agh thank god I have the finale easily accessible! Finally an ending! It better be satisfactory! With your writing style, I'm sure it will be though! Onward