I've been going through my alerted stories when I came across this story. I re-read it and am now sitting here in a puddle of tears. You *are* going to finish this, aren't you? You really can't just leave us here with our soggy tissues in hand without some closure...

Please?

This is brilliant! I think you got the emotions of the day's events perfectly. You need to proof read - there are quite a few grammar and spelling mistakes/typos that you would know to correct as soon as you saw them. Also, you should try to vary your sentences a little - they're all pretty fragmented with lots of commas - try using more short sentences and more semicolons, there are plenty of places where you could put them in. Also, though, I noticed towards the end that several of your sentences are fantastically structured and could not be worded better by Rick Castle himself! This really makes me want to read on, it's fabulous, but do consider how it looks on the page and how correct it is, because then people will know you are a serious author and very professional. Caskett being my OTP, you actually affected me emotionally! Brilliant opening! :D

Wow somebody pass me a tissue.

-This is not real, this is not real- she tells herself while rocking on her desk chair with tears in her eyes.

Jenn! He can't be dead! I still refusing to accept that. He must zombie his way back or something! Oh god, the funeral, I'M going to die of sadness reading that

OMG. A BUCKET FOR MY CREYS D:

Oh my God! My heart is laying on the floor crushed in two! I hate you SOO much right now! Maybe Castle isn't really dead, it's only undercover because of the CIA and Castle comes back...or...something...

And along with what a lot of you said, whenever Sofia would have a scene, my roomate had to remind me that no normal person screams "Bitch! Bitch! Bitch!" at the top of her lungs towards a TV screen!

FYI, I cried. Those episodes were amazing. Except when that bitch told Beckett she wished they hadn't slept together. FAIL.

Awnnn! That was so sad! :( I hope she will find Rick, no matter the price it cost or the way she does it.

I hate you right now Jenn.

Why?

I've got a lump in my throat and tears in my eyes. Nonononononono.

Bad Jenn!

Even if it broke my heart into millions of pieces, great work darling! You better sit your ass in the computer and write me some more.;)

WTF! :'( THIS WAS SO SAD! I can't read anymore my hearts going to break, this would be so terrible if anything like this happened on the show, everyone would be so sad they would , other then it being sad, good writing but still way to make me cry man

I now understand what your tumblr message meant this morning... You aren't allowed to go around breaking my heart like this without better warning. (Kidding. Interested to see where you go with this.)

You broke my heart, as i already told you on tumblr (couldalwaysjustcuddle)