Cute

Such a sweet and loving story! I loved it! Awesome writing! :)

LOVE IT!

awww! such a cute lemon!...usually those words should't go together in the same sentence! and judging from ur picture, ur an Ash and Misty fan as well? yay! not only did ifind a marvellous story within the piles of shitty stories, i also found an AxM fan aswell!

Oooh gosh, that was soo sweet! I've just read another fanfition far hotter than yours, and a bit agressive if i could say. But yours won my heart. Really, that's the way i picture than together. When you said "I feel that I owe it to Inuyasha and Kagome. After everything they went through in the show, I feel they deserve a more mature love" dude, i feel the same, and some day i would write it. I can say you inspired me. Thanks, and congrats, that was really sweet.

so sweet, that warmed my heart :)

Awww! :)

That was very beautiful and touching!

Very cute story!

mew...

aweee how cute..just the perfect ending or rather beginning to the next season of inuyasha...it was just wonderful...

Somewhat short, but enjoyable for what it was. The writing was good and I like how there was real passion in this, not just mindless smut. The characters seemed perfectly accurate too. I could picture them acting and thinking as they did here.

It's funny to think of Inuyasha getting turned on by having his ears rubbed. Guess that explains why he doesn't like people doing it under normal conditions. It's also kind of a shame you skipped to their third time. I think it would have been interesting to read your take on their first.

I also see you used the theme of "romantic biting" or "mate mark". That sure is common around here. Guess a lot of people on FF like it.