Ok...I'm sincerely smitten with your storyline...and I (sincerely) sic hope to read more! I don't often risk an 'uncompleted' story...but I'm happy to say this story was bloody worth it. Now if you'd please, please, please add another chapter(or 15?), I would be ecstatic.

I loved this story so far, I hope you can continue with it :)

I really like this plot..
I'm so worried for Jazz..hope Edward can gain Jazz trust..

hope Edward can really help Jazz

I love this story..
plz moreeeeeeeeeeeeee:))

Glad I started reading this. Looking forward for more. :D

I wonder how old Jasper is.

Love the story... BUT what about Alice? Is there 2 or is it the same?

That was perfect and it looks like they both need each other! Fate...thx...gr

*wiping the tears from my face*...Beautiful story... just beautiful. The emotions are so strong...I smile and I cry... a lot.

Looking forward to lots more.

Catherine

My heart just breaks for Jasper. I will NEVER understand how a family can do such horrid things to their own flesh and blood. I know it happens, but I could never do that to anyone. People are just that... people.

Sorry for the rant, it's something I feel strongly about.

I love your story and look forward to more.

Catherine

Hey, I've been following your story for a while now, I was so pleased when you posted another chapter!

It is an amazing story!

Please post more soon! XXX

Glad Jasper talked to his sister. Seems like Edward has some things to work through with his own family.

Edward s'y es bien pris pour aborder le sujet de sa famille à Jasper et maintenant, ce dernier est beaucoup plus confiant, rassuré et sait que désormais sa vie va retourner sur les bons rails grâce à son sauveur!

Edward a su s'ouvrir sur son passé pour la première fois avec quelqu'un car il a une histoire difficile avec ses parents tout comme lui et ça les rapproche et ça montre aussi à Jasper qu'il n'est pas le seul à avoir des difficultés dans ce domaine et que ça peut arriver à tout le monde.

J'espère que Jasper va pouvoir apporter du réconfort à Edward qui a été le laissé pour compte de sa famille, tout comme Edward a su changer sa vie.

A bientôt.

I so love this story. I'm so glad that Jasper talked to his sister. Can't wait till they get face to face :) and can't wait to see what happens next between Jasper and Edward ;)