| Reviews for On The Way Down |
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   weep for the empty chapter 29 . 5/18/2019 You nearly broke my heart! i had to stop reading when i thought john was dead. i can't wait for your next update, this is so freaking interesting. XD |
| Guest chapter 29 . 11/6/2014 This is amazing. Please don't abandon it! |
| Astrido chapter 29 . 6/22/2014 i really like the idea of the story and in general it's well written, however there are some parts which are a little difficult to understand. especially some dialogue about locations/military stuff. cheers yuura |
| hatondog chapter 26 . 6/14/2014 Augh! I have ripped through this wonderful work and just realized that I'm nearing the end of the posted chapters and the story isn't yet marked as complete. Which is good in that there will be more to look forward to AND my poor eyes will get a break after reading 29 chapters until 1:30 am. Since I'm barely able to force my eyes to keep reading, much less writing, I'll have to defer a better review for a while. But until then, bravo for a truly absorbing and tense story that's been more than worth the lost sleep and dry eyes! |
| Sue chapter 29 . 6/13/2014 I have reviewed before under a different name...but I am SOOOO glad you are back and continuing this story. I hope you update sooner... :) Love your style! |
| Guest chapter 29 . 6/13/2014 Oh, yay, you're back! I was a little worried this would be abandoned. |
| thedragonaunt chapter 29 . 6/13/2014 I love the tension you create between them - like the most uber sibling rivalry EVER! Two formidable foes; imagine how impregnable they would be if they would just co-operate! Great up-date, well worth the wait. |
| thedragonaunt chapter 28 . 3/1/2014 You certainly know how to turn the screw! Love the detail, the suspence and the tension. Excellent update! |
| Guest chapter 28 . 2/28/2014 I love you. |
| Guest chapter 27 . 2/15/2014 I would love you forever if you updated. |
| Lorelei chapter 1 . 1/28/2014 Please, please, please finish this story. I'm on the edge of my seat here :-D |
| thedragonaunt chapter 27 . 1/9/2014 Excellent! Brilliant up-date, full af suspence and drama. Great dynamic between the brothers. Graphic descriptions painted the whole scene in my mind's eye. Poor Mycroft! What a terrible shock for him! Please, get Sherlock some medical attention for his fractured skull! |
| Gothika chapter 27 . 1/9/2014 This story is great, keep it up can't wait for next chapter :-D |
| Guest chapter 27 . 1/8/2014 Oh man this is thrilling. John lives! Maybe! |
| Rosaline chapter 27 . 1/4/2014 This is awesome! I can't wait for more. |
