Ohh ohh this was so...damn..good...aahhh Okay I really loved this! I never read anything like that before! Ichigo being the second Hogyoku and all, and I just love love love the way you write Aizen, half the time I couldn't decide whether to love or hate him. Hnng and all those wonderful OC's! This was really amazing and I'm going to re-read this a couple of times. Such sweet IchiRuki! Thank you for sharing :D

Thanks for the story!
I love Shiro, Grimmjow and Nel in this story~
It's great!

You know it does make sense if he was a hogyoku. No one gets that powerful that fast normally. Great story by the way and good luck on others.

MAN...!
WHAT ARE YOU?!
This story is amazing!
I nearly crying...
GOOD JOB.

Wow, already love this story. I love the way you write and hope Renji comes in soon!

Wow. That was good

Just wanted to post as myself. But I'll say it again. Wow that was GOOD!

Liked it. *flashes a thumbs-upp*

You know thank god your horrible at writing yaoi. Reason? People who write yaoi here at fanfiction are terrible at writing it anyway. Seriously people always find grammar mistakes, terrible scenes, annoying rape or was he raped? Scenes, writers who can't make a fuckin decision, and finally just writing like a frantic fangirl on steroids with mushrooms mixed in the fun those writers have in burning our minds with literally bull shit no one wants to read. This shit is usually common here at fanfiction and it only increased when fanfiction yaoi fans came here. I don't hate yaoi it's just people who are fans of it can't think and are in their little fantasy world when writing it. Literally forgetting that readers need to be taken into consideration. And I'm a guy so.. I can say shit about yaoi. Not because I'm straight or gay. It's because I'm bi. Simple, I know when I've stepped across shit here at fanfiction and I'm sure you would too. There are too many shitty writers and I have to say if you continue writing stories like this I'm all for it. It's rare finding someone with talent like this and finally. Get a fuckin job as a writer you have my support. Well all in all looking at the positives and negatives. You got a 9/10 from me. The reason though it's not 10/10 is because you forgot only one thing. Just one. And that's the fact you killed miko off in a story that ended in a way miko had only been here for three chapters making it kinda dissapointing but all the positives forgive that, so basically try to avoid killing off characters near the beginning miko was barley even there. Or even had the chance. So bye now. Write more you got my support.

Whether you may or may not admit it.. Your story just got annoying rather than intense.. I don't think anyone should just explain how so. I would usually give you reasons why like other writers but this just takes the icing of annoying. And if you think that's a good thing you may have lost many readers to that because of your narrow minded thinking.

Thank you for this awesome story o

:3
Bravo for an amazing badass fanfiction.
I tip my hat to you.
Thanks.
-Winged Serpent of Light

THIS. FIC. WAS. TOTALLY. AMAAZZIIIINNNGGG! XD
It made me wonder was Ichigo really a Hyougoku like you said? because I have not finished reading the manga lol
and ur explanation about Ichigo getting stronger because Hyougoku grated his wishes were possible too
fav. totally fav this fic!

HUWEEEEEEEEEE (it's too sad I didn't know what to say) :'(

ohh a turn of events so interesting i love it