I like this story so far, a lot!

Brilliant chapter. I loved "Pants off. Back in the bed. Now." hahah I can just see Wash saying that. I loved the bit where Jim turned up too and when he said that he would have Malcolm deal with the videos and then they both said no and I loved the bit where you mentioned Ayani, I like the fact that it is a similar thing happening with Wash now and I loved the bit where Miles said that he didn't get to vote hehehehe I can't wait for the next chapter :)

Great chapter. I loved the bit where Miles was talking about Ayani and I loved the bit where Miles pulled the towel of Wash and then she took his shirt off at that point I was right there with them haha. Ahh it was just brilliant, all of it and omg the end when Taylor turned up. I can't wait to find out what happens :)

First of all omg you took my favorit song (you found me) and I loved that you did also the part where wash stardet crying,..just great. I liked the idea with the songs but at some point it was a bit confusing. I wasn't quite sure at these points if they are listening or singing th song. Also the part with the name, it's a matter of taste but for me it was a slight bit to much...(but just a slight)

THE ENDING :O AWESOME! :D :D :D I just knew that something like this was going to happen but I didn't hoped so...I want it fluffy the whole time but without a bit angst, anger and all this stuff wouldn't it be boring? :P I'm really excidet for your next chapter.

Thor hammer? Really? Wonder if Taylor's going to be jealious about his brother getting a nickname first? Even though I have never watched Avatar (don't hate or shoot me) Miles seems like a more nasty and vindictive Commander Taylor. Ogawa really should go for Miles then we won't have a fight for Wash blood bath.

By the way, I admire how you can keep everyone in character. I could know a fandom well and still not keep people in character.

Omg I love this so much. haha I am crying from laughing so much and I literally cannot breathe I am laughing so much. I loved all the bits with Ogawa and when she goes 'unfortunately no' ahhh sooo funny. And the bit with Josh oh my god hahahahahaha This is brilliant I love it so much. I think I am going to go and read it again

HAHAHAHAHA! I laughed so loud that my sister came into my room and asked me if I was okay...really the "it" thing was just so funny. I can't help myself to start liking miles a bit. (just a bit) He was so charming and so obviously flirting with wash...that was kind of sexy... Even if there was no wash/taylor in this chapter I liked it because I'm still hoping that you rather get ogawa and miles together. They would be a cute couple...:P I really hope you mention thor in a few other chapters again like a continuative joke. I also loved Elizabeth and her rules and how confused both women were and how "relaxed" miles was. I would like to read more of those three. I can't wait for th next chapter. :D

Great update!

Awww! This was perfection! I loved the m/w kiss and Taylors jealousy... how they were challenging each other,...JUST BRILLIANT! And I love Doc. Shannon in your story. She is so much more realistic than she is on the show she appears to be a real person...I like that and nurse ogawa also seems to be an interessting character(are there some realtionship initiating?). But I need to say (cause I don't know if you wanted it to be like this or not) I actually don't like miles he is so...i don't know how to discribe it...kind of rude and...I dont now I just don't want him to be together with wash. she deserves the gentleman taylor is...:S

L.O.V.E.

That is all i can say for this update. I loved it. Jealous Taylor is my weakness, you know that and this story is basically that - im having a field day. Please make Washy lucid soon, I want to see this tug of war. Seriously i just have too many nice things to say about this that ill be here unti the cows come home. Its late and I shall talk to you tomorrow. I am even including some Jim/Taylor :O

Great chapter :) I loved the Miles/Wash kiss ! And Taylor was just perfect and Miles was just perfect and Wash was just perfect and it was just so perfect. I loved the bit where Ogawa was flustered and at the end where she and Elizabeth were calling Wash a lucky girl. And Malcolm ahhh Malcolm he never fails to make he laugh. And the Jim/Elizabeth bit was brilliant.

Never seen avatar, this is a good story

AHHH I love it! You now I love all your storys but this one is definitely my favorit this far...I hope you continue SOOON. Are you going to continue? I would love to read some fluff and a "flirt-war" between the taylors...:D

Great chapter :) Drugged!Wash is hilarious. I loved how Miles had to keep ordering her