I'm sorry I haven't commented before...I'm getting more into leaving comments lately, but I think this world you created is a perfect blend of Star Wars and Criminal Minds. I feel so sad and terrified for Reid right now. I keep waiting for The Reaper to throw him to the Vi'Tani again. *shudders*

I love how the team is still able to kind of 'watch' what happens to Reid through the Bond like they were able to do on Hankel's computers in the actual episode.

Wow. This is amazing! I fell in love with your H/R series Let Me In, and when I saw this, I was very interested, as I grew up on Star Wars. You are a very talented author, and I love the way you perfectly fit the personalities of all the characters. Many times you had me laughing or crying. I'm not normally a big fan of crossover fics, but you really hit the nail on the head with this. It's very impressive the way you have paralleled this story with events that happened in CM, and the symbolism is a wonderful tease. I look forward to episode three of your installment!

I am curious... did you make up the Vi'Tani creatures Ahmose? I tried to Google and Wookiee them, no luck. Anyways, I am totally in love with this story!

oop. I feel like I shouldn't waste time reviewing anymore since you pointed out your best reviewer & told them they specifically were why you update. Why should I make the effort if I can rely on their comments to get me another chapter? :) No more reviews from me!

Oh, wow, I wasn't expecting to shed tears over this chapter. Amanda/Adam's death really yanked some strong emotions out of me! I wasn't prepared! That last small kiss they shared is probably what really sent me over the edge. Heartbreaking! Also, to rewind, when Hotch told Livion to surrender and he spat back his "never" it felt eerily deep-rooted. Like Livion was letting him know during his display of in-the-moment defiance that he'd never give up the fight for complete dominance. That Livion is something else. It's almost frightening to think of how powerful & destructive he would be if Spencer wasn't holding him back.

Darth Livion is back! Darth Nocturn is a master at his craft.

I like how Reid and Hotch are able to communicate and offer support to each other in this way. Sad that Hotch hurt Reid by being insensitive with the comment about his situation. Not something he needed to hear while preparing to face horrible torture. Glad you didn't drag the case on too long! It was actually very well done & I think you fleshed it out in a proper & timely manner. Now off to save Reid!

Interesting & well written case but I find myself rushing to read through it just to get back to the Livion plot. A bit frustrating but I can understand why it's necessary. Maybe I'm just feeling this way because I know it's taking precedence over Reid's rescue.

Wow. That one memory of Livion wiping out the senator was intense. I couldn't see an ounce of light within him. Too bad for Darth Reaper it couldn't stay that way. Happy that the bond has found it's way back & hopeful now to see Reid so encouraged by it.

Hearing Reid plead for Amanda not to use the lightning on him hurt. Poor boy! I'm sure that won't be anything compared to the pain he'll soon face though.

Ready to see how Darth Reaper handles this insubordination. He's clearly not holding back anymore! Evident by what he made Tobias force upon Livion.

Go Livion/Reid! It seems the light broke through after all where Master Virr was concerned. I find Amanda struggling with her feelings for him interesting too. We knew Tobias would stay back during the Livion attack but it was a relief to see Amanda stay put as well. I don't want to call it a bond really but.. I like the dynamic between those two (her and Livion).

Max Ryan has legitimate concerns in my honest opinion. I'm hoping for a recovery along with the rest of the team but Reid HAS killed quite a few already. And he's proven that former loyalty's can't persuade him. Yes he felts guilt after the damage but that doesn't negate the damage done. & I think it's nice that you're responding to all reviews but why not just use the PM feature? That's what it's there for.

A lot of Livion in this chapter! I'm always looking forward to his scenes so this chapter was great. Amanda's.. crush is interesting. I like the way Livion is handling it so far. Very worried about Master Virr right now but maybe this will be the moment Livion fights back? We'll see!

I like the relationship between not only Adam and Livion/Reid but between Amanda and Livion/Reid too. The way he thought to protect Amanda from the Twi'leks just as much as he was protecting them from her. One thing I noticed a lot in this chapter (as well as in a lot of your fics) is the use of snorting that you have the characters do. I've seen so much of it it's starting to stand out. In this chapter specifically there was one part where Amanda snorted.. Reid snorted right after and then Amanda did it AGAIN. I think you might be relying a little too heavily on it. Seeing it too frequently becomes laughable and now I'm not reading an action packed story but a parody. Just something you might want to keep an eye on! Other than that small thing it was another incredibly thrilling chapter.