This was a nice read. A little confused about why Harry had the scar when Voldemort did not actually hit him with the killing curse. Also a bit of an unsatisfying end to Voldemort as I doubt he would have ever felt remorse for anything he did. Also the individual feeling remorse doesn't destroy the horcruxes but puts the pieces of soul back together. It is excruciating and in Voldemort's case would have killed him because he created so many. Overall, an enjoyable read.

it was good but very short
would prefer longer stories next time please

This is great! I my self have been trying to write some fan fic. on Harry Potter, its not going as well as yours seems to be going!
Great Job!

Can I have chocolate chip cookie too? I read this story and loved it! Good work. Yes I know it really does feel satisfying to switch the thingy to complete haha

please tell me he's not going to awake in Harry or something like that.

Good chapter glad you like my reviews.

If you are lacking some will/motivation perhaps do 1 big chapter to end end containing:

Potters location found and they are rescued by Sirius, Remus.

After recovery and a dispute with Albus they get Harry from teh dursleys - you decide whetehr or not Harry will be abused etc.

The Potters return to James parents mansion etc

you can then perhaps edit the final chapter and add many new chapters in the future when you are motivated again.

Good chapter, I do hope they get the Potters back before Harry goes to Hogwarts and Harry doesnt stay with the Dursleys til he is 11 especially say James and Lily are rescued and wait til Harry attend hogwarts since he is likey to be pissed when leanrs he has been deceived by his own parents.

anyway please update soon

Owe boy I think Sirius will have to do a lot of begging when Harry returns to the wizarding world if he is left with Petunia.

So will Dumbledore. and teh rest of teh order I think.

Hell Harry copulkd only go after Voldermort to get his parents back providing Voldermort hasnt turned them into his servants and ecidess to use them against Harry which would be alful for Harry if he has to slay them. Harry should manage to do so but turn his back on magic completly

Owe boy I hope Harry doenst have to wait years til he manages to get Lily and James back say when he is in his final year at Hogwarts. Hopefully it wuill be sooner especially if he is left with the dursleys.

That said would voldermort brainwash Lily and James and use Lily to torture her own child especially if she is made to believe he is an enemy.

If that were to happne Harry would never forgive his parents even if she knew what Voldermort had done to them.

anyway looking forward to more chapters oon

Good 2nd chapter, I hope Harry doesnt have to go to the dursleys.

It will be sad If voldermort has brainwashed Lily and James and uses them to attack Harry especially if Harry gets seriously injured by Lily that would destroy any trust he has in them.

I think Lily would be deverstated if she knew she had attacked her own child.

Voldermort is in bigtrouble