Sorry, but thus is a kind of boring storie but it IS a good story also did you make up the chapters because if you put the chapters together it is like a pome did you write that ?

Loving this story very much...thank you for sharing

Great fic

I am so pissed with hermione in this story

1. Draco has every right to know about her secrets
2. Dont tell him that he isnt invovle in any of this mess because he was hell damn involve the moment you asked for his help to accompany you on the appartment
3. You should be damn grateful that draco saved your ass from that cancer becase if he didnt help you would still be on your death bed and wouldnt be bitching on him now
4. You should be lucky that draco only wants you to help him with his father and free you once hes fathers healed not like the others that would make you suffer a lot

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG So sweet. Such a good story

I can't read this anymore. Malfoy is fucking retarded, how the fuck hasn't he realized what's going on. The way you wrote his character makes him completely unlikable. The whole bloody plot itself is bloody infuriating.

O why wouldn't the headmistress allow her friends,who at the moment,are her only family to visit or care for her?Why Malfoy?That doesn't seem plausible or realistic.

I get that Draco invaded her privacy, but she did the same thing to him earlier in the story and he didn’t freak out even though she went through his letters too... just thought that was interesting. Reading this story it has been a bit slow, but it will teach your readers patience if nothing else. Some people need to calm down and notice that they will get answers eventually. Why not just enjoy the story in the mean time. I much prefer a story like this that is well though out and complex as opposed to a story riddled with plot holes.

I wanted to love this story so bad because your writing is amazing but this story was very draining and slow with too many questions left unanswered. You dragged Everything out so long that I just stopped caring. By the time the climax hit and the romance kicked in I already quit. I’m all for a slow burn romance but oh lord I was extremely frustrated.

*grabs the tissues*

well Hermione stubbornness also needs some bravery

It really would serve him right if she nevr gives in. Know she knows he knows how to help and she doesnt wanna sie or whatever but seriously.

This was an extremely boring and predictable story, I was able to tell everything except for Narcissa's involvement after about the first 7 chapters... It was all too fast and the characterization wasn't good actually. All in all, I've lost too much of my time on this awful read

I enjoyed this story immensely . although i did find it quite slow on the romance side ..the plot and characterization was amazing. Take care and thanks for sharing this wonderful read

This was excellent. I devoured this in an evening. Although, did you resolve the slave bond, because I don't think I caught it if you did.