Reviews for HeartSoar Day
Mama chapter 1 . 4/3
Cute 3
Dalmasio chapter 1 . 6/3/2016
Obi Wan's dedication to the Jedi order is commendable. Going as far as kissing Asajj Ventress ? On the lips ? For quite a long time ? What a brave man. I'm sure it was hard, but he did his duty anyway. We're proud of you, Kenobi ! And maybe a little bit jealous, too...
KenobiMyKing chapter 1 . 2/6/2016
That was lovely thanks you !
SneakyThorongil chapter 1 . 7/11/2015
Fun I love their banter !
Guest chapter 1 . 6/5/2015
perfect!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/21/2014
Continue please
miarath chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
This was very enjoyable. :)
Maybe you could do an epilogue or something?
I think it would funny to see Anikan pestering Obi-Wan about his 'date'... LOL
Brightknight chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
Enchanting :-)
Skarlettefox chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
I could really connect with this, as i hate Valentines day, not cause of the saint, but it has become very commercialised.
Kris Wise chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
I found this story very amusing. Just a couple of things though. Does Obi-Wan say "my dear" THAT much? Hum, maybe he does. Another, and this is a big one, force users can't have conversations telepathically. They can communicate feelings and only a few words at a time. Regardless, I liked the story.
Nerd91 chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
very nice. I was disappointed that Assaj was not included in the pre-quels she could have been used to some extent especially in episode 2 or even part of episode3 to keep Obi-Wan a little more interesting.

once again very nice job.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
Cant wait for the next chapter if you make one
BladedBlossom chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
This is a cute fic. OMG, the kiss was so sweet. You managed to create a plausible scenario so that Asajj and Obi-Wan could get together and not be melodramatically antagonistic, as happens often in romances.

I like "Jade" as a pseudonym. It seems to work for Asajj. I have visions of Jade and Ben meeting up on Tatooine after the war.

Nice way to put Obi-Wan complimenting Asajj's dress in there without making it seem like he's doing it.

Thanks for sharing.
NotIn2012Anymore chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
yay another story!absolutely adored this its great, very original idea.I've only read one other fanfic where they go on a date and Ventress wears a red dress. They also share a kiss to throw off their enemies, but that story has more of a Siriwan theme to it. Just wondering if you've read that one, but anyway great story as usual! Umm about your name I think it would be a bit confusing ir you changed it, but its your choice.
Terra Young chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
Very good!
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