I LOVE IT. You're such a great writer! I'm obsessed with these mal and natara fan FICA & this is by far the best I've ever read. PLEASE WRITE MORE!

3 ur amazing at these fanfics

Awesome story you should make another like this. It was great

Hey!

You did a good job on this chapter, I love it! :)

And noooo, you didn't turn me down of course not, I still think you did wonderful and if you don't want to do a rated scene no problem, you are the writer :3

I did like it a lot, I love and adore the different emotions and doubt in this chapter, great job! :D

Hope you can update soon!

That was a good chapter really cute how Mal was you did a good job and I still love reading this :D

AWESOME CHAPTER! You display their emotions anazingly! One of the best I've ever seen! Like I can just picture this in my mind, you use such great detail abd UH! I could just eat it up! So much maltara goodness! Yummy! So glad your back Val!

You like THG? Im the biggest fan in my school, no joke. I live in a THG fantasy world. Katniss is my bestie, Peeta's my brother,(Because we have a love hate relationship, although now...it's all love. But it wasnt that way always.)

Gale's my best friend, Spoiler: Rue and Cinna are my deceased Besties (creepy and kinda sadistic I know) while Prim is sweet angel:'). The list goes on...

Geez homework! My god I'm sorry, Val! And your other fanfic friend! I wish my friends would go on fanfic! Or at least be loyal to CoD. But I'll find a person who's in love with it eventually! (Not counting you guys!)

Really LIVE your story so far, but don't feel pressured to write if your bombarded with homework! I totally know the feeling, but not as extremely as you do!

You're amazing Val! Your writing technique is awesome! I love it! it's not diificult for me to read because I'm so into it! You get me hooked! Seriously though, you are like one of the fluff writers on here! Molly's your big competition, she's the Queen. But you have such different styles, so your both the queens in my eyes!:D

Your new nickname is Maltara Ninja! Because let's face it ninjas are SUPER cool! My nickname is Kalaba Twin, just because I'm ditzy, bubbly, goofy, and strange!

So see you later Maltara Ninja! Hehe

LYLAS,

Kalaba Twin!

Wait! We should start a ninja squad! I'm Kalaba Ninja, you're Maltara Ninja!

Ninjas Unite!

See told you Im like Kai!

Ok seriously now, see you later, Maltara Ninja!

Awwww...

Your back! :D Thank you for dedicating this chapter to me and your CoD sisters! We've missed you! :)

Awww I think this was a much better way than an M rated chapter! It made it better! :)

Well done and don't worry! No need to apologise!

It was soooo cute and fluffy! I loved it!

- Molly

Aw I cried! So fluffy! That's ok girl I don't want to pressure you :) Keep going!

HI EVERYONE. this is jasmine, val's good friend. ahahahaha she um. doesn't know how to write a rated scene so um. yeah BUT ANYWAY KEEP UP THE GOOD JOB :DD AND PLEASE DO YOUR SS AA THANKS.

I ment to add that you should do a rated scene... See how far the characters are willing to take it and btw I've read this like three times today :P

Omg I looooove your fanfic it's One of my top faves! Keep writing!

Hey, Valerie where are you?

I tried PMing long time ago, but no reply :(

Just wanted to see how everythings going with my bestie :D PM when you can. I miss you!

-Karen

Thanks for taking it consideration!

:)

Yes count me in! :)

One quick ? Why did you just let them sleep when Oscar was still in the room? Lol

Omg! This story is awsome, amazing, BRILLIANT! :3

I love it so so so much :D

And yes! Oscar deserved what he got! That that... .

Anyway! I agree, you can throw in a rated part, curious how that one will come out ;D

Anyway, amazing job! Hope you can update soon :)