Reviews for Collision
AcademiaNut17 chapter 8 . 1/1/2016
Oh my god! This is such a good story! PLEASE tell me that you are going to continue!
Bad Coffee chapter 8 . 12/27/2014
Hard to believe Roberto could be related to such horrible people. I guess that's just one more thing he and Rahne had in common...
As bad as this looks, I know Rahne's faith and her friends will bring her through this and I'm interested to see what you have for us in the future. Your writing continues to impress.
Dragoncat chapter 8 . 12/18/2014
I've been waiting for this story to continue! Thank you for not letting it gather any more dust.
Whenever you can... KEEP ON WRITING!
Sunspot101 chapter 2 . 10/19/2014
I practically cried! this is so sad! and shame on Roberto for not having his seat belt on!
Sunspot101 chapter 1 . 10/19/2014
Loved the first chapter, Keep it up!
Bad Coffee chapter 7 . 10/14/2014
That part with Remy and Rogue was really good...nice to read something uplifting.

On the flip side, that was a great cliffhanger with Rahne and Roberto's family...thinks don't look good for my favorite character.
I hope you can update again soon, but I remember what grad school was like. Oh and don't be too flustered about a 2 yr hiatus...I'm just back after 10 to write a new story about Rahne.
Again, excellent job, I'll be watching this story.
Bad Coffee chapter 6 . 10/14/2014
Remy and Rogue continue to be interesting. I'm also very curious about Kurt's mission and why he still can't be honest with Kitty and Rahne about it.

Tabby gets no love...sigh...
Bad Coffee chapter 5 . 10/14/2014
You hit close to home with this chapter. I had that same conversation Kitty and Sam had one night after a really bad call...
On a lighter note, you really are doing a great job with this story and I'm interested to see what happens with Kurt. He needs to get himself in order, Rahne is in enough pain already without nightmares like that one.
Bad Coffee chapter 4 . 10/14/2014
Hope you don't mind reviews from and Auburn Grad...

You continue to do a great job capturing the loss and pain the characters are experiencing. It's painful to read sometimes, but its a great story, one of the best I've seen around here since I got back. You really seem to understand the characters, especially Rahne and while this is a different take on Kurt, I like it.
Bad Coffee chapter 2 . 10/14/2014
I think you've done a good job with this chapter. Honestly, it got to me and I almost wanted to cry with her. I think you did a good job of capturing all the pain she's in and how her emotions are just going crazy. I've worked as a first responder and I've seen this too many times...never get used to it. This feels real to me.

Having followed her in the comics for years, this is all the more painful, because all she ever wanted was to have a family who loved her...
Dragoncat chapter 7 . 6/1/2014
I love reading new chapters. Keep on writing!
J.HunterFiction chapter 7 . 5/23/2014
I love the emotions and writing in this story. I hope for updates c:
Dragoncat chapter 6 . 8/27/2012
Every new beginning starts with the first step. Keep on writing!
ninjachick0228 chapter 6 . 8/17/2012
Yay! So are they eventually going to talk about the thing that happened?! Or is that all we get? Because my imagination will screw with this entire story if I don't find out. But I like it. Love it. 3
TPatel chapter 5 . 8/14/2012
Love it! So sad but really great :) can't wait for more! Congratulations on your grades!
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