Awwww! I so love Viktor & Hermione.

Aaaw how cute! Loved! :-)

Viktor and Hermione are one of my favorite pairings.

Haha - loved this part: In fact, Arabella Figg sent an owl to Minerva after the battle and asked her to come pick up something that belonged to her. I think her words were 'He's eating me out of house and home. I presume you want him back.' It was Moody. When he fell, he landed in her back garden. She had hidden him all this time." - this is so original and very clever!

Good job!

Hey! I loved your story. The description is good and makes me feel what Hermione was feeling and the comparison between how Viktor and Ron treated her was awesome! Though I would have loved to see a tad bit more of it. You have a way with words and that would have given it a more spice to it.

However, the story is pretty good! Keep up the good work! Plus, Viktor/Hermione ships are out of canon and that gives you some space to work with things you wouldn't be able to do if the couple was completely canon.

On another note, I would like to refer you to a role-playing site called Sonora Academy. It based on the the HP universe and it gives you a chance to experience magical schooling in a whole different level. I have a feeling you might like it and fit in with all the other authors!

www. sonoramagic. com

If you have any questions you can ask me! Hope to see you around there! In the mean time, keeo writing! You do it splendidly!

Loved this One-shot!

It was so sweet! :d

nice