Hey! When will you be updating? :)

Form (For Ministry Workers)

Name: Rosalind Eleanor Hawthorne nee' Stoll

Age(20-70): 32

Gender: fem

Do they have kids: Emma Hawthorne ( she is eleven and just starting salem witch academy), Sophia Hawthorne (she is seven), Rebecca Hawthorne (she is five)

Department: Law enforcement department

Position: Head

Home Country/Ministry: Portland, Maine: U.S.A ministry

Alma mater: Salam's witch academy

Personality/Attitude: spirited, opinionated, bossy, motherly when it comes to her daughters, she can be very over talkative in a conversation and a little bit of a procrastinator and a day dreamer. She is a perfectionist though and has a need to do everything perfect. She is very easy to talk to and always has something to say.

Blood Line: half-blood

Appearance: Wavy black hair that is usually in a braid that wraps into a bun, chocolate brown eyes, pale dull skin, board shoulders and wide frame. Pointed nose with a sprinkle of freckles on her cheeks and nose.

More info: Her husband died while doing research on a devil's snare so she hates herbology.

do you still need all the spaces you mentioned in chapter three? or has this chapter been updated more recently?

This sound completely amazing such an original idea i hope you use mine and please tell me if she gets in i want to know also i forgot to mention but my OC is jewish

FORM (FOR STUDENT!)

Name: Rivka Leah Levi

Nickname (If one): no

Age (between 13 and 16): 16

Year: 6th

Gender: Female

House: Ravenclaw or Slytherin

What school they're from: Middle Eastern School of Magic

Best Class: DADA

Personality: could seem cold but gets angry easily she is often snarky and when really angry her israeli accent gets really noticeable she has a hard time making friends and fights easily she is really confident and speaks her mind she is really rebellious and gets into lots of trouble she jokes with her friends a lot independent she is a very passionate and fierce person always speaking up for friends and helping them with their problems though she isn't so great with people she likes animals better and acts awkward sometimes she hides it under a cold exterior and only those who really want to know and care for her can be let in she is very loyal and can hold grudges she also hates when people think she isn't as good as them especially if they are sexist men she can be pessimistic sometimes she is also very protective she is a good person but can lose her path sometimes but with others help she always goes back to the light

Appearance: Darkish skin very tanned she has dark brown hair almost black it's thick and wavy reaches midback has round dark brown eyes and has a willowy and curvy body her facial features are sharp she has arched eyebrows and long lashes tall

Broom (if one): Firebolt 2011

Family: her father David Levi is a soldier in the israeli army he is away often and her mother Sarah Levi a witch was killed a few years back in a terrorist bombing she was

Blood Line (Muggle, Pure-Blood, Half-Blood): half-blood

Do they play Quidditch (If so, what position?): chaser beater

Favorite Activities: Pranking people exploring surfing quidditch taking care of her pet

Attitude: pessimistic confident sarcastic

Favorite Clothes (besides robes): rock band tee shirts (coldplay u2 marroon 5 greenday) black distressed skinny jeans black converse sneakers

Favorite Color: purple dark blue black

Favorite Book: percy jackson and the olympians maximum ride

Favorite Food: mac 'n' cheese

Favorite 'fictional' character (vamp, ghost, etc.): shapeshifters, Fairies (not the little cute ones the dangerous ones like in wicked lovely or iron fey)

Favorite Animal (fictional or not): Dog,wolf

Favorite/theme song: Marron 5 Payphone

Hometown/country/where they live: Tel-Aviv Israel

More Info: she lived in a small apartment and her family isn't that rich she got into trouble a lot due to her natural curiosity she dreamed of going into the army and being a pilot and almost got in when she snuck in until her father dragged her back she her mother besides being a witch was also a Faerie (unseelie) passing on to Rivka some of her powers (like wings and control over water ice and storms) Rivka never really fit in anywhere before going to magic school she was devastated when her mom died they were really close instead of joining the army she formed a band with her few friends she played lead guitar her witch powers developed late and she thought she was a squib until she was 13 and her powers finally started to show (quite violently) she was overjoyed since her powers (both her fey and witch) connect her to her mother

Name: Andre' Cabret

Nickname (If one):none

Age (between 13 and 16): 16

Year: sixth

Gender: boy

House: Slytherin

What school they're from: Beauxbaton

Best Class: Astronomy

Personality: Andre under estimates himself all the time and always gets in trouble. He is very harsh at times but will care if someone he loves is hurt or upset. He is very serious and responsible and will never joke around cause he thinks it's kids stuff. He never gives up, he'll do what he has to do until he succeds. He is very ambitous and wants to suceed in life so he studies and trains for quidditch, having no time for lesiure. He will never share his feelings with anybody unless they can guess it before he tells them. His temper is very short and he can get mad fairly easily. Not the forgiving type.

Appearance: Tanned skin and elfish features that make him look as though he is up to something all the time. Black combed-over hair and clear, cold grey eyes that always seem to be angry about something even when he is happy. He is very tall and very lean like a lamp post. Yet he has muscle's from he beating position. He has strong white teeth.

Broom (if one): comet-seventy

Family: Berterand Cabret (father, half-blood, unspeakable), Nathalie Cabret nee' Levy (mother, half-blood, robes clothing store worker), Antoine Cabret (brother, 4th year, 14), Sofia Cabret (sister, 12, second year)

Blood Line (Muggle, Pure-Blood, Half-Blood): Half-blood

Do they play Quidditch (If so, what position?): Beater.

Favorite Activities: quidditch, running, climbing trees

Attitude: harsh, serious, up-tight and strict

Favorite Clothes (besides robes): athletic clothing with a mix of modern and causal

Favorite Color: green and red

Favorite Book: Quidditch through the ages and the Hobbit

Favorite Food: Crème brûlée

Favorite 'fictional' character (vamp, ghost, etc.): Bilbo Baggins from the Hobbit

Favorite Animal (fictional or not): a Threstal

Favorite/theme song: The theme song from Big band theory

Hometown/country/where they live: Paris, France.

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her I'll give you another one (they're twin)

FORM (FOR STUDENT!)

Name: Miyuki Minase (used to be Miyuki Shimizu before she change it with the permission of her step parents)

Nickname (If one): Yuki-chan, Mio, Cute Princess or Miss. Walking-Book

Age (between 13 and 16): 14

Year: 4

Gender: Female

House: Ravenclaw

What school they're from: Shie Nong Yu Shuey Wizarding School

Best Class: Defense Against the Dark arts and Potion

Personality: At first glance, she seems very calm, collected, never talked until someone talks to her and serious. But once you got closer to her, you’ll see her true self; kind, caring, patient, understanding, friendly, and determine. She can be quiet merciless and deadly in battle. She’s also can be pretty mischievous to peoples she didn’t like much. She’s stubborn, brave and never back down from her words. She has a tendency to taps her finger when she was nervous, anxious, mad or bored.

Appearance: She has long straight black hair with curl at the bottom that reaches her waist, Sapphire blue eyes, and fair skin. She is slender, graceful, athletic and has a great figure. She has heart shaped face, almond shaped eyes, well defined chin and cheek, pointed nose, thin lips, and low arch round brows. She loves to let her hair fall and keep her bang with flower shaped hairclip.

Broom (if one): No

Family: Suzaku Minase (her father, deceased), Hitomi Minase nee Nomiya (her mother, deceased), Masaru Minase (twin), Sakura Shimizu nee Sakamoto (step mother, 41), Kazuki Shimizu (step father, 42), Arashi Shimizu (step brother, 20), Takashi Shimizu (step brother, 18), Kenichi Shimizu (step brother, 15)

Blood Line (Muggle, Pure-Blood, Half-Blood): Pure Blood

Do they play Quidditch (If so, what position?): Nope, she’s too scared to do any flying except if she had to do it.

Favorite Activities: Reading, Listening music, Karate, Painting and Singing

Attitude: She’s very friendly to her friends and had this aura around her that make people loves to be around her. She can be very intimidating if she wants to.

Favorite Clothes (besides robes): Black vest with phoenix on the back, long sleeves blue T-shirt with waves on its front, black trimmed T-shirt, blue dresses, black or blue jeans and skirt, black shoes and sandals

Favorite Color: Red, White, Brown, Blue and Green

Favorite Book: All books except coughcoughporncoughcough (her foster family will scold her non-stop if she read it)

Favorite Food: All Japanese’s foods (she’s not too picky about it except if it was made/contain pork, which she detested)

Favorite 'fictional' character (vamp, ghost, etc.): Ghost, she thinks they’re funny in their own way

Favorite Animal (fictional or not): Phoenix, Pegasus, Wolf and Butterflies

Favorite/theme song: Parallel Hearts by FictionJunction

Hometown/country/where they live: Nagoya

More Info: She and her brother were separated when they were 1 year old due to their parent died by accident (more precisely, kill by their family’s rival). Her brother got adopted one week after they stay at the orphanage (because they want a boy and like him at first glance). Not long after that, she got adopted to a half blood family who was kind enough to her that makes her feels determined to be good daughter. When she was accepted to Shie Nong Yu Shuey Wizarding School, her foster family was so happy and sad to because they had to tell the truth to her. Before she goes to Shie Nong, her family told her that she was adopted, her real family name is Minase and her parents are died. They also told her that she had a big brother who was adopted to other family. After hearing this, she became even more determined to study hard. Luckily she met her twin at school after accidentally took his blood and test it with her with magic (since they had a remarkable face that make her suspicious). She told Masaru that they’re twin and from there on they became inseparable except when they had to go to their foster family.

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FORM (FOR STUDENT!)

Name: Masaru Minase (used to be Masaru Kaoin)

Nickname (If one): Black Prince or Masa-chan (no one dared to call him that except his twin sister)

Age (between 13 and 16): 14

Year: 4

Gender: Male

House: Slytherin

What school they're from: Shie Nong Yu Shuey Wizarding School

Best Class: Potion and Charms

Personality: He’s very calm, collected, serious, sly, revengeful and cunning. He can be merciless and ruthless to his and Miyuki enemies. He’s very protective over Miyuki, since he finally met his twin sister and didn’t want to lose her, too. He’s very quiet that he can sneak past anyone without the other noticing his presence. He’s very loyal to anyone he respect and love that he willing to sacrifice his life to them. He also wants to prove to his step father that he wasn’t a disappointment and make him regret for what he did to him.

Appearance: He has messy short black hair, Sapphire blue eyes, and fair skin. He is tall, lean, and athletic-looking. He has an intimidating aura around him. He is said to looks exactly like his father.

Broom (if one): Firebolt

Family: Suzaku Minase (her father, deceased), Hitomi Minase nee Nomiya (her mother, deceased), Miyuki Minase (twin), Misao Kaoin nee Anzai (step mother, 37 before he was exile), Ryota Kaoin (step father, 39 before he was exile), Sayomi Kaoin (step sister, 17 before he was exile), Akito Nakada (his new step father)

Blood Line (Muggle, Pure-Blood, Half-Blood): Pure Blood

Do they play Quidditch (If so, what position?): No

Favorite Activities: Reading, Swimming, Talking with Miyuki, Playing Violin and guitar

Attitude: He’s very cold to everyone he didn’t know really well (especially to any member of Kaoin’s family) and tend to keep his emotion by smiling fake smiles to his friends (though only Miyuki can see past his acts)

Favorite Clothes (besides robes): black T-shirt with skull at the front, black jackets, black jeans, black shoes and sneakers

Favorite Color: Black, Blue and Silver

Favorite Book: Manga (though, he never showed it to anyone except Miyuki) and School books

Favorite Food: He doesn’t had any favorite foods

Favorite 'fictional' character (vamp, ghost, etc.): Vampire and Werewolves

Favorite Animal (fictional or not): Snake, Phoenix and Wolf

Favorite/theme song: Yuukyou Seishunka by Ali Project

Hometown/country/where they live: Shizuoka

More Info: He used to believe that he wasn’t want by his father because he’s a disappointment as his father loves to call him. Only his mother and sister who love and care for him. One day, he makes a mistake that make his father to exile him to his friend place. He even makes his mother and sister to promise to never contact or help him. Before he was exile from Kaoin’s family, he asked why his father hated him so much and always abused him. He told him coldly that he wasn’t his son that he was adopted to Kaoin’s family because of his step mother who want to had a son and he was an ungrateful brat that never appreciate the Kaoin’s family generous helps while the other member of Kaoin’s family laughed. From there on he saw the truth appearance of Kaoin’s family and promised to kill all of the Kaoin’s family except his step mother and sister. Luckily, ever since he met his twin his thirst for revenge went down a little bit but he still determined to took down the Kaoin’s family.

P.S.

Masaru is te older twin

Name: Zoera (said zoe-ra) Carly Ryone

Nickname (If one): Zoe, Carls.

Age (between 13 and 16): 14

Year: 3rd

Gender: F

House: Slytherins

What school they're from: Cleopatra

Best Class: herbology and Potions.

Personality: shy, keeps to herself, but can be brave and outgoing, perfect for spying on people which she does.

Appearance: dark tanned skin, red hair cut so it starts short at the back of her head but gets longer the closer it gets to the front, startiling gold eyes with red flecks, straight body.

Broom (if one): no but she has a small carpet big enough to fit her.

Family: no family she was adopted by the school.

Blood Line (Muggle, Pure-Blood, Half-Blood): half blood (you will see why later).

Do they play Quidditch (If so, what position?): she does with a practice broom that the school lets her use.

Favorite Activities: flying, running, exploring places and learning.

Attitude: quiet and normally only speaks when spoken to.

Favorite Clothes (besides robes): ripped brown skinny jeans, tight green singlet, high tops and a black bow in her hair.

Favorite Color: black silver and bronze.

Favorite Book: the half blood princes potions book which she learns more from than she does with her teacher.

Favorite Food: hot chocolate and spicy curry.

Favorite 'fictional' character (vamp, ghost, etc.): were wolves.

Favorite Animal (fictional or not): lemur.

Favorite/theme song: darth vaders theme

Hometown/country/where they live: in Cleopatras shcool.

More Info: she is a were wolf thats why shes a half blood.

HI! :-)

By the way i love how you thought William and Ratsu looks like :-)

But I think Raymond's hair straight and not wavy, also Kayla's skin color is light tan and not black like that. Oh well...

Hope you update soon :-)

Nice start! very interesting!

Dude don't use "Rebecca Laurent." that's a weird name.

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Angel Coulby?

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Friend: cool! id love to submit a chapter for you!

Best Friend: Well that was an exciting chapter

hahaha :)

Hey, it sounds really good so far! Update soon! :)

Well done so far! I like your writing style and I'm excited to see how the story progresses. D

Hi, i'll give you another ones! :)

FORM (FOR STUDENT!)

Name: Raymond Will Mitchell

Nickname (If one): Ray, Mond, Will, or Wise Boy

Age (between 13 and 16): 13

Year: 3

Gender: Male

House: Ravenclaw

What school they're from: Salem Witch institute

Best Class: Transfiguration and Potion

Personality: kind, strict, perceptive, witty, stubborn, quick thinking, wise, sarcastic, calculating, harsh and judgmental during first meetings, but after winning his approval he is very loyal.

Appearance: straight chin-length black hair with his bangs hang mostly on the right-side of his face and the rest hanging behind his left ear, gray eyes, fair skin, oval face, pointed nose, low arch round eyebrows, well defined chin and cheek, calculating stare, tall, athletic-looking, muscular and lean.

Broom (if one): FireBolt

Family: Athena (Mother, Goddess of Strategy and Wisdom), James Elliott Mitchell (father, Pureblood)

Blood Line (Muggle, Pure-Blood, Half-Blood): Pure Blood

Do they play Quidditch (If so, what position?): Seeker

Favorite Activities: reading books, listening to music, playing violin, write letter to his father, practicing some spells, and doing his homework.

Attitude: see personality

Favorite Clothes (besides robes): black jacket with owl on the chest over the blue T-shirt with “Knowledge are Power” on it, silver wristwatch, owl shaped necklace, black jeans and black combat boots.

Favorite Color: grey, blue, black, brown and red.

Favorite Book: He loves all books about magic, anime and Mythology.

Favorite Food: Steak Diane, Lobster Newburg, Eggs Benedict, Vichyssoise, black and white cookie, and muffin.

Favorite 'fictional' character (vamp, ghost, etc.): Vampire, Ghost, Werewolves, and Gods (before he know that his mother is a goddess)

Favorite Animal (fictional or not): Owl, Pegasus, Snake, and Cheetah

Favorite/theme song: Alone by Aqua Timez

Hometown/country/where they live: New York

More Info: he got a gift (his necklace) from Athena that can make him invisible to anyone except his mother, Zeus, Hades, Poseidon and himself when he tap it. He also got a blessing from Aphrodite since “he’s so cute but unfortunately girls only aim for handsome boys” that make other girl (who wasn’t in love with anyone) drool over him. He used to be cheerful and reckless before his best friend died trying to help him. His Patronus is owl.

FORM (FOR STUDENT!)

Name: Kayla Amira Rahman

Nickname (If one): Mira, Ami, Lia or Crown Princess (since it was the meaning of her first and second names)

Age (between 13 and 16): 13

Year: 3

Gender: Female

House: Gryffindor

What school they're from: Middle Eastern School of Magic

Best Class: Ancient Runes and Defense Against the Dark Arts

Personality: brave, caring, harsh, determined, daring, understanding and has a bit of a temper.

Appearance: long straight black hair that reach her waist, dark blue eyes, fair skin, heart shaped face, pointed nose, high arch round eyebrows, quite tall, slender, athletics-looking and graceful.

Broom (if one): FireBolt

Family: Zeus (father, God of the sky), Leila Sana Rahman (mother, muggle-born)

Blood Line (Muggle, Pure-Blood, Half-Blood): Half Blood

Do they play Quidditch (If so, what position?): Chaser

Favorite Activities: playing quidditch, looking at the stars, practicing her demigod powers, singing, painting, and read books about Mythology and his school lesson (namely Ancient Runes and Defense Against the Dark Arts).

Attitude: She is also very loyal to those she trusts and respects, as she is willing to risk her life to protect them and never goes back on her word.

Favorite Clothes (besides robes): Long sleeves blue shirt, silver bolt shaped necklace, blue wristwatch, long black skirt that reach her legs, black sneakers.

Favorite Color: blue, gray, white, and brown

Favorite Book: Mythology’s, Ancient Rune’s and Defense Against the Dark Art’s books

Favorite Food: She love all food from her country

Favorite 'fictional' character (vamp, ghost, etc.): vampire

Favorite Animal (fictional or not): eagle, wolf and leopard

Favorite/theme song: You Raise Me Up by Josh Groban

Hometown/country/where they live: United Arab Emirates

More Info: she got Ahprodite’s blessing which make her looks more beautiful than before that she starts to attract more boy to her. Her patron is Artemis because they had something in common and that’s their love of Hunting and Wilderness. Her Patronus is eagle.