I have actually read all of the chapters of this story and I would like to say that this is well written and thought out. I humbly ask for you to update again so I may read more of this wonderful piece of work.

I would have reviewed several more times than I already have, but my reviewing system is rather odd. Anyways, I really like the story so far. It is really nice.

However, the story is listed as Eridan/Feferi. I haven't even seen Eridan yet... So I'm just slightly confused over that matter, but I have faith that you will fox the story in one way or whatnot.

Good job!

Gamzee is the worst possible person you could ever meet. Ugh.

I really like the whole story telling style of yours. It gives the story character.

I love the plot and the canonity of the whole story. :)

This is so awesome! But when does Eridan come in? Can't wait for more updates!

Well gull im loving your fic and I just can't get enough of it! I reely hope you update it soon, its been like a month. Don't just leave it like that! 38(
And is the fic EriFef at all or is it RyuuFef or GamFef or something? I reely like your pairings so far though. Even RyuuFef!

i love this story(: your great at writting! i feel a little romance would make this story a tad better, but thats just my opinion _ good job!

This story is really well written, but there are a couple of things that are bothering me. First of all, Ryuu just seems a little Gary Stu-ish. Not in his character itself, but in the way he's a part of the story. I think it would work really well to just replace him with Sollux, unless you plan on introducing him later. They seem pretty similar. The other thing is how everyone is reacting to the news. All of Feferi's friends have finally found out that she was raped by Gamzee, and what do they do? They comfort Tavros who's upset Gamzee cheated on him. I think that everyone, Tav included would be a little more shocked at that. I mean, rape? Kind of a big deal. Other than that, the story seems pretty good so far. Keep up the good work!

Lawlz. Anyways, that was awesome. And just saying, this thing IS NOT boring at all! I can wait anyway, and I suppose I can understand everything. Le awaiting your update! O u O

Dx did I judge him too? :( I'm so so sorry if I did.
:( if..if this is ur story (life story)...does it have a happy ending?

i must say, i love how you addressed the comments. normally i don't like this approach, but i feel that - for a story like this - it works.
i hope this doesn't discourage you from writing anymore, because i adore this story!

Okay. Hi. I love this fic so much, so FRICKIN' much. I loved the twists and shocking ends of chapters which made me kneel over on the floor when I realised the chapter was at an end. It is my very favorite Homestck fanfiction, okay? So dont get me wrong when I say this, but Ryuu... is a little boring. To me at least. (maybe its because he isnt a canon character? idk) I really admire your writing skill, but Ryuu centred chapters I seem to skim over, than the earlier ones where I used to read slowly and soaking exatly whats happening. :3 This is the first time I've ever written any constructive criticism (idk if it was really constructive :3)

Awesome story! Can't wait to read more o

Where's the eridan?! :(

Just so everyone knows, I currently have no internet, so there will not be an update until the middle of August. But of course, you guys will be getting around 5 chapters at that point, so hopefully the wait will be worth it! (Can we tell I've been bored without internet?)