well done and thank you.

very good

Well Done!

Aaaahhhhh! This fic was awesome...there needs to be more Densi fics likes this :D ...quality! x x x

Love it! So much!

"The vending machine had been out of her favourite snacks and as it was Sam's turn to get lunch, he'd provided healthy tofu wraps for everybody which were practically inedible." - OK, so Kensi is probably past cranky from hunger.
"she was on the receiving end of a thoroughly spectacular kiss. She'd had to kiss Deeks before, to sell their cover in a few ops. But then she'd also had to kiss Callen, and Sam. Those kisses had always been…professional, in as far as kissing your work colleague could be considered professional. It was hard to get romantic when you had the team back at the OSP chatting in your earwig, anyway. If her heart rate had risen a little when it was Deeks who had been nuzzling her neck well then, there was their unnamed, undiscussed, unconsummated 'thing' to take into account. But he'd never kissed her like he was kissing her now, like she was the centre of his world and all of his attention was focused entirely on her." - I am not sure whether the current kiss sounded like fun or ominous.
"So, although going undercover at the club wasn't a surprise, the tattoos were. Normally, she did her best to fit in with the other women in whatever club or bar they were staking out, and heavy tattoos would make her too memorable. Hetty had supervised their application, directing the OSP's makeup artist from the ankle all the way up Kensi's body. The black tribal tattoos were surprisingly delicate, considering that they ran up her left leg, around her thigh, traced over the curve of one hip and up her spine, flowering over her shoulders and down both arms." - IMO, those tattoos were awesome.
"'She got into the shower cubicle and sighed as the warm water started to pound her body. God bless the previous owners, who had done up the bathroom before selling the house. They had bought a deep tub, long enough for her to stretch out in without curling up her legs, and had built an extra-large shower cubicle with multiple jets." - Yum! for that heavenly- and expensive-sounding shower cubicle.
"I do love you," she interrupted him. "More than the others, different to the others." "I should hope so," he said, kissing her forehead again. "I don't think that both you and Sam would fit in this shower at the same time." She laughed," - The thought of Sam and even the most anorexic girl in all of creation actually fitting in the same shower cubicle together made me laugh too.

You write great dialogue for our favorite crime fighting love struck duo. There voices sound like the show the way you write them. Love the shower scene beginning as a joke, a tease and turning in to something real. Kensi's actions were unexpected and exciting! Great fun to read and very sexy.

How excellent!

I actually don't see their first time this way, but I can't deny the awesomeness of this fic.

You have a wonderful imagination for stretching out an episode. I love what you did here!

Now "favoriting." lol :D

I love it!

I loved the undercover bar op and the morning banter of this episode and your added parts just upped the Densi factor for me!

Fantastic job!

Fantastic job - more numbers please!

Please MORE!

This was amazing. I hate how little Densi moments we've been getting on the show lately. How I wish this really happened.

I don't know if you are keeping this as a one shot or continuing it, but I look forward to more. Great work.

You really write their voices so incredibly well, I always know when I see a story from you that they'll sound exactly as I expect them to. And I loved the dichotomy of their relationship here. Both of them holding back in their own way, committed to each other emotionally but still bothered by the physical nature of other relationships they pursue. It felt realistic and a little heartbreaking in its own way, which was why I was so happy to see them come to more of an understanding at the end. And what a great understanding it was! Intimate, beautiful and perfectly them.

Very hot...we need more Kensi/Deeks smut.

That. Was. Beauiful! If NCIS Los Angeles was an adult show rated tv-ma I could totally see this happening. I loved the whole shower scene, this is definitely the best Densi fanfiction i've ever read!