Omg... I liked this story no i just loved it

What is next?

Eh, When is Shinichi gonna return?
Is Masaya gonna get killed?
Where is the next fire gonna be?

Wait a second.. If Yuki was there that day Shinichi became Conan, WHY DIDN'T SHE TRACK HIM DOWN SOONER? something's fishy here.

Also, hey Masaya, you're back! and cheating, too! _

You know,the first time I read this story, I only stopped because I didn't like Masaya AND I was pissed off at Ran. Seriously, dweeb asks Ran to marry him and she says YES?

WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU. I MEAN IT, WHAT IS WRONG WITH RAN! SHINICHI LOVES YOU, HES IN A SHIT SITUATION AND YOU LOVE HIM, AND THE FIRST GUY WHO TREATS YOU TO A DATE, YOU PRACTICALLY SPREAD EM? THIS IS BULLSHIT AND I WILL NOT STAND FOR IT

AND YOU, SHINICHI! YOU ARE A LIEING STUPID IDIOT BAKA! WHEN THIS HAPPENS THIS IS HE TIME TO GO CAVEMAN "NO RAN YOU MINE". WHEN MASAYA PROPOSE TO HER IN FRONT OF YOU, ARE YOU STUPID!? ARE YOU?! RAN WANTS YOU TO SEE IT AND TELL OFF THAT MASAYA PRICK.

YOU GUYS ARE SO STUPID. I FEEL BAD FOR YOU MASAYA. YOU ASK THIS PRETTY YOUNG BROAD TO MARRIAGE AND IT THRNS OUT TO BE BULLSHIT. YES, RANS BULLSHITTING YOU. SHINICHIS BULLSHITTING YOU. CONANS BULLSHITTING YOU. GET ANGRY. FEEL THE ANGER

RAAAAAAGH ლ(ーლ)

Wow, that was definitely not how I imagined this chapter to go.

I just got so scared...

lovely story so far!

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conan tell ran the truth

ran
yes
i will say somthing ran said what

iam shinichi

whaaaat you are shinichi
Black orzagnation give me the posion not agasa ran said go out

This is just a note from someone who's decided to give this a try: Please make up your mind whether you'd like to use past tense or present tense because you're using both right now.

Thanks .

It's not liked! It's loved! This! Story!

This is the second time I've seen this. I mean, Hakase's house being burned up then, ended up dead. The other one seems to be more worse like again, his residence got burned up and inside he got shot by someone in the Organization. I think that was one of Tobina's fanfics.

' 'tnotice._ImeanYukiandConan'sprivacy...

_ I can't believe what I just read at the last phrase. Lol btw, at least Heji-niichan did something to stop them XD

I feel someone broken hearted XD