Hot

I can't believe I only just found this one! What a HOT story. *fans self*

What a great love scene! And I love it when she calls him these lovey dovey names!

Hahahaa! Really great! I loved it!

Hot, and sexy as hell.

a nice little interlude :)

This was just lovely... And their position? slhsadh! HOT

that was so wonderfully erotic and, incredibly enough, sweetly funny at the same time.

huge kudos for writing a love scene that was so easily visualised! It's not easy to write in a way that the reader knows exactly where hands and mouths and all the important bits are! *snort* but you did it perfectly.

love love loved it.

If only all our dreams could end in such a pleasant manner ;p

Very nice...:)

Either a nice way to be waken up or put back to sleep but please keep writing.

Very good work! I like how you didnt make it too long :)) most authors screw the sex scene up, but you did great! i kinda just ran into you fanfic... while i was looking for this other fanfic. Which i still cant find... if you dont mind do you know a M rated fanfic that has Kate breaking into Castle's loft and finding him a little frustrated (lets just say that...) any clue... please tell me... its killing me from the inside :)) here's a favourite ;) happy typing... and btw go ahead and read my new fanfic Young, Blue and Green Eyes :))

Hot hot hot! Cue the applause.

lol! I think so, too. Swimming is good. So are hot dreams.

Totally hot. Better than any dream I can remember ;-) Keep writting!