very well written, both hot & sweet

'Sweetheart' Just ... no

I really loved it. So hot and sexy!

That was freakin' HOT! Thanks for sharing! :D

LOOOOOOOOOVED IT! You did an amazing job! Fantastic! Oh, and pleasure-shudder-inducing sexy. ;) I can't wait to read more from you!

I think I...need... A cold bath right now x)

This was awesome, super hot and super well written :)

I'm glad your friends made you post it.

Great job. ;)

100 thread count sheets? That has to be a typo as 100 TC is not much better than a burlap feed bag.

WOW! This was one of the best romance fics I've ever read! You should consider becoming a romance author! I LOVED it! 3

WOW! I think I'm gonna go take a cold shower now. Loved it!

I loved it. :)

Xoxo

Sanne

Great story. I would love to see you write more. Just a fact check for your story though. 100 count sheets aren't luxurious. I have 600 count sheets and definitely not wealthy.

Where's the ice when I need it? That was...amazing.

"the fire deep in the bit of her belly roars into life once more" - that line is brilliance.

I'm so pleased you wrote a second part!

This is exactly what I envision after Rick/Kate finally consummate their relationship...They just can't seem to stop making love, lol! (But with Marlowe in charge, that certainly WON'T happen) Great job with the smut! It was wonderful.

THIS. IS. HOT.

Please tell me there will be more?