Awesome fic.

This is well written and cute! I really like it.

cute

you have more sense than all of the other people. at is the best

You should make an sequal or some awsome glob

Please write more of these stories! I was originally a Finn bubblegum fan but they way she treated him in the last few episodes... Bitch!

I'd love to see more Flaminn stories out there!

Can I just say, Wow? I hadn't realized this existed, which is a shame because I've been dying to see something with Flame Princess, and I gotta say this delivered perfectly! Wonderful job on the characterization; their dialogue, attitude, and handling of the situation was very much in line with the show's. Combine that with the sweetness of their romance, and you've made me a very, very happy girl.

ahhelga, AKA Pauline

Continue this story! :D

You really should continue this:)

I don't necessarily like Sugarless Gum by itself, 'cause my number one favorite AT pairing is Fubbeline. Ah... Nice Story

Aw this was a cute story! It gave me a lot of mushy-ushy feelings haha. I liked how you had Finn get a little serious about how he felt about PB. It's nice to seem him think critically sometimes.

OH MY GLOB THIS IS THE BEST ADVENTURE TIME STORY EVER ! ! ! !

lol but yeah serously they were so in character and that's exactly how I want the flame princess to act hahah

And I LOOOOOOOOVE how u associated her powers with the gem! ! ! IT ALL MAKES SENSE! ! !

hahah in conclusion , this story is gorgeous, u rock at writing xD

This is a really good read. You were able to capture what the characters would be in the actual show, and it came out incredible. If it were up to me. I would make this a real episode. I really have nothing more to say, I am speechless.

Keep up the good work.

:)

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