Excellent story, really, really hope you continue it

I was hoping Kal-El wouldn't turned into a Clark Kent...

Looking forward to one day soon receiving an alert that this story has been updated. Hope you find the inspiration to continue.

This was by far my most favorite story to date, It really pulled me in and I hope one day you update it.

Please update this story its much to good to give up on.

I really like this story, i hope the author finishes it some day

You're never gonna update this, are you?

Wow, I hope you get back to this someday. The first three chapters were completely awesome. There are so many story lines to follow.

Damn, i hope you update and finish this someday.

This is an awesome story please don't give up on it.

Please dude, for the love of god UPDATE this! Ive been looking for a long time and so far Yours is the only portrail of superman where He is dark, willing to kill and still at the same time a stand-up guy...oh yeah I forgot to mention FREAKIN BADASS.

I dont get why its always so black and white with Dc about taking an enemies live, He either doesnt EVER (at the cost of many innocent lives) or He becomes a omnicidal Tyrant.
Meh probably because they like their villains too much.

Anyway Im looking forward to know what the Kryptonians and the Cabal exactly want from Kal-El.

I like it, interesting story line. Diana seems like Diana to me, I guess I mean her personality matches what I would envision her to be in this type of a storyline. Batman is interesting enough, though I am unsure of how I feel about him backing down to Lois Lane. I just see him looking for a loophole and not resting til he finds one. I mean I see one immediately but then, you might have already thought of it, rejected it or are using it. So, not saying, if you do wish to know, pm me and I will tell you. Otherwise keep it up, I believe your doing great. I love the way you brought Artemis into the story, that is brilliant. As for the rest, I suspect the Cabal are who they are, the bad Kryptonians, I mean you do seem to have good and bad as well as normal humans working with them. I am interested to see how Lara-El is figuring into all this, I mean I get she is his mother although the blonde hair is a bit confusing, then again, here I shall suspend my disbelief and go with the hair color change. As for Clark's personality. I can live with it. Not use to seeing him in this light, but I would think if I was really pissed off, and had that kind of power, then there would be times, I would cause damage. So it works for me. I imagine when the romance happens between Clark and Diana, it is going to start out angry and progress from there. Hot and heavy. Well until next your publish... Ghost.

Love the story, I hope you haven't put this on permanent hiatus. Please please please update and finish.

this is great. I hope you finish it.

Great story...I'm glad you have Supes like the golden age comics, agresive & assertive if a bit hardheaded & prone to mistakes, but having the wisdom to learn from them... look forward to more chapters