Since I just made a promise to Gohanroxme minutes ago saying that I will do my part as a reviewer to help revive the Claymore fandom, I thought it appropriate for me to review to one of my favorite stories by one of my favorite authors :)
I am ashamed to admit that I am one of the floaters that never really reviewed stories :/ I truly do not think my reviews would matter much. However, it's the least I can do now to hopefully bring new stories to life through the encouragement to talented writers.

I love the way your stories read and the happy emotions that they invoke in the readers. Though I am quite sure that you are already aware of this fact from all the more frequent reviewers.
I do hope you will continue to be a big asset and contributing force to the Claymore universe. Oh and I love ClarexRaki (after timeskip ;)) I hope you will write more entertaining stories for your avid fans soon!

Really nice story, in a quiet, cute way.

...we need more stories like these: where our fearless and strong Phantom Miria shows her vulnerability.

I absolutely loved this! I love miria..well ever since I found out that her name is a shorter version of my name...and with an "i"...whatever, point is, I loved this!

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OH MY GOD YOU'RE BACK! I missed you my comedic genious friend!

Excellent story and very well written. I like how you show Raki's friendly personality affecting Miria.

Very nice work. As always.

Good point about how Hysteria could be lured into battle by her personality quirks.

this is a very sweet story with good emotion in it. good work here.

helen still makes me laugh.

It's wonderful to have a new story from you even if it is just an oneshot.

Miria is having quite hard time in the manga lately so to see her getting the guy for once is nice as well.

I miss Raki fics, somehow the ff dot net users hates the guy, I personally more than like him, he's no hero in the beginning but that's understandable, I find that a 10 year old kid is quite worthless in a fight for one is refreshing, and now when he is older I find him awesome, not because he is some sort of super fighter but because he is just a normal guy in a monster filled world and while in the middle of it he still manages to keep a smile on his face and even encourage others, those much stronger than him.

Ah this is so sweet. I love it

Nice to have a touch of nonhumor, barring Helen, related friendship. Since your usual forte is stated in the beforehand sentence.

While I don't think events work that way as I kind of can imagine Clare-and-company-of-awakeneds package speeding toward the battlefield *just to make Miria's life more miserable) but if THEY don't show up what you described is my best guess.

Claymores are kind of like tragic puppy that were frequently kicked by a bunch of sadists, so having that hunk of a man, Raki the not-so-scrawny-anymore being kind to them and treating them like what they were supposed to be if not for the organisation AFTER seeing the wound is kind of a marvel for them.

That's true especially for Miria, who did all that and survived hell to see this day in the name of vengeance and justice. Now the easy part of her mission is done (because hey, she ruined island sized weapons lab of an empire) it must have been great for her to see someone other than her warrior-sisters appretiate her.

And of course Helen managed to break herself...

Not counting Miria, I think at least all the trainies and Raftela are officially members of Crush-on-Raki club for hybrid ladies.

BTW, where is our favorite baldie?

Very sweet scene and one I hope occurs in one form or another in the actual manga. Great job. Until next time.

Saw the small changes; another wonderful story as always Dany :)