| Reviews for Naruto: The True Warrior |
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Danirodriguez1995 chapter 20 . 6/19 Where can I find the continuation of this story that was very entertaining, please |
Halofan2117 chapter 2 . 6/6 Okay I like the story and I don't care if it is a harem as long as it's done correctly. But why the hell are you dissing Hinata man! She is an adorable cinnamon roll and best Naruto character besides Naruto himself. Btw I don't mind her not being in the harem in fact I applaud you for doing something besides what everyone else does. Just don't hate on her is all Im saying. |
Kingkong101 chapter 16 . 11/18/2019 Short and boring |
XenoLucifer chapter 14 . 10/20/2019 There are a few big problems with the story, namely the pacing and how many things you pack into it at once, it makes the story hard to follow and properly understand. The characters will also not have enough time to grow in the eyes of the reader, I see countless authors do a timeskip and bam! their main character is super powerful and when people complain about him/her getting strong too quick they respond with "But he/she did train for years in the other dimension" or something. Do you get what I'm saying? |
Fanficlover2017 chapter 20 . 11/17/2018 Don't reboot what isn't broken please update this fic! |
King Kyusharu chapter 8 . 11/11/2018 This harem is too damn big |
Guest chapter 2 . 8/30/2018 Okay, not to get into an argument, but just felt the need to point out that a lot of people give Orihime and Hinata shit about being 'spineless', Orihime's power revolves around healing and Hinata is more suited as a scout even with Gentle Fist, sorry a chakra-infused finger poke won't do much in comparison to a fucking Rasengan. Either way, these girls are MADE to be support, yet the people who often call them 'spineless' go on to list women who DO have power, yet do nothing with it... Rangiku... pretty useless, Kurenai pretty useless, Nemu pretty useless... and why the fuck is Koyuki on the list? Look, I get you're just a hater, just at least have the balls to say you're a hater and not use your AN to call people whiny bitches when you can't even just come out and say "I just hate this person because I hate canon or blah, blah, blah" I mean you pretty much killed the 'All Tits and No Spine' when you made Koyuki who literally is NOTHING, a harem choice but not two characters who could actually serve a purpose beyond being fanboy porn material for Naruto to get it on with later. |
omegaderose chapter 2 . 6/22/2018 why dont you write naruto/bleach crossover in the describtions seriously some readers hate crossovers |
EvergreenMoth8 chapter 1 . 1/26/2018 i know its way late to say this but you should have added a female chad, just picture what she would look like lmao |
Natsubi chapter 8 . 1/21/2018 ok, the chapters are way too short my dude, and the book itself is short, and rushed, its a good idea for a book, but you could have, and should have went into more detail |
Monster King chapter 20 . 1/3/2018 A shame that it looks like you gave up on the story. |
Mariusz1988 chapter 20 . 11/18/2017 The fights are nice and story is a good paced. Thx. |
Kesshi Uzumaki chapter 20 . 10/30/2017 Are you gonna reboot The True Warrior? I loved this story! |
HyperA1985 chapter 1 . 9/15/2017 I am looking forward to chapter 21 and I vote Karin be part of Naruto's harem. |
shadamy-fan1934 chapter 1 . 5/23/2017 You asshole you should have put both Hinata and Orihime in the Harem but made them both OC and A little Op |