Completely doesn't make sense here. Seifer injuries were neer questioned at all, CID is an idiot who seems obsessed with gunbladers and Kadowaki just seems incompetent and severely understaffed. Just venting though. Might be lack of sleep that is making me angsty.

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Seriously Seifer only won because Squall sheathed his gunblade after giving up the fight. That just really pisses me off. Good story so far though. Kind of wanted the fight to be more action packed but as it is, it was rather well written.

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I havent logged into my account in years and when I did, this fic was the first few fics that I simply had to check for updates...you cant believe how much it made my day to see that it as completed and it definitely was a joy re-reading the entire fic right from chapter one.

I love this fic and it has relighted my passion for ff8...especially when you had the characters retaining the distinct personalities that they held during the course of the game.

Fantabulous job on this fic! I definitely will be catching up on more of your fics )

PS: Why must Seifer die? :'(

Wow. Things are really starting to heat up there... can't help but think that Seifer's overreacting a little.. and I feel so bad for Quistis! x_x

HAHAHAHAHA Squall dropped Seifer off at the Island Closest to Hell! xD That cracks me up so much. Can't say he doesn't deserve it though.. sorry but I don't feel much sympathy for Seifer.. in the game. Maybe a LITTLE in this story.

overall i'll ive it a 8/10

some places don't link...

could've done better but for someone you age..

its good...

uh.. this chapter is kinda weird

cause in the previous chapter...

squall was going to find rinoa...

then in this chapter...

its was written that selphie found him sitting with the rest..

shouldn't he be looking for rinoa be then?

Wow.. I can't believe it's over. It was long but well worth the read. I thought you captured the triangle between the three wonderfully. I loved Squall and Rinoa's happy ending, they definitely deserve it after all the hell they've been through. I must give you props, it was a great story. I wasn't expecting anything (I'm not too big a fan of Seifer/Rinoa fics) but yours I really liked. Keep up the stories! I'll watch out for them.

It's so beautifull. I just couldn't bare to read 'Seifer Almasy is dead'

IT BROKE MY HEART!

Wow! You finally finished this up. I didn't realize that it took so long. Great job! I loved every chapter, and you really improve! Keep it up! _

AH, I can't believe that this is over, and that it's been so long since you first started! I loved this chapter, as usual. I'm so glad that Squall and Rinoa will be getting married and will finally get their happy ending. It was also great to see everyone get some closure regarding Seifer. I hope to see a new FF8 story from you soon! Awesome job _

This is a really great story. I'm so happy i got to read another chapter! It was a bit awkard with the 'we're getting married' thing at his grave though, lol, never the less it was all great.

why? why? why haven't you updated this story? WE are waiting the last chapter of the Squall/Rinoa story, even when we love the Seifer/Rinoa story, we wanted to know the other side of this GREAT story. (I write WE because many of my friends also read your story but they don't review, but also are specting your next update)

Wow, its done! What a great story

THIS FIC IS BEAUTIFUL!

I love you, I love you AND your fic.