cute...whipped! lol.

This was retarded. It really seems that the writer has never had sex.

I enjoy a bit of smut!

I like that there was another paintball to make a trilogy or a 'threequel' good idea.

My only negative thing is that your dialogue feels OOC; i can't ever imagine Jeff or Annie saying they'd lose their 'Jeff or Annie virginity', things like that.

But the story was still really enjoyable.

I liked this. I don't know if i believe that Annie would want her first time with Jeff to be in the study room or at paintball, what with that being a repeat of J/B. Even though she's matured, i think she'd still want the traditional bed seduction from him. But i liked al the build up and your reasoning behind their motives.

The sex was really hot and i laughed at Annie being offended/grossed out by Jeff coming all over her without warning. LOLz.

Nice ending too with them conspiring against Chang. They would so totally do that because really, they are exactly like each other (i think conspiracies proved that).