That is a lovely moment; it brought tears to my eyes.

Is that song Whiskey Lullaby? I mean, I haven't heard it in a while, but that seems to match it to a T.

Aww! Adorable!

What a sweet fic. I've been feeling rather nostalgic myself in recent days, so I can definitely relate to Kel's longing for a time she can't return to. Neal's role in the story was especially sweet, though I wonder if he ever gets homesick as well.

Good job on this!

A good story, considering the fact that your theme was nostalgia, which isn't easy to write about. But, one thing I noticed was that, the wole story was quite vague and has holes that really need to be filled.

I'm sorry if you think I'm being picky, but writing 'mom' is quite modern, the time in which Kel certainly does not live in.

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