| Reviews for Breakdown |
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  Emily chapter 15 . 5/7 DANG IT! I was so invested in this stop, noooooo please finish. Or have someone else finish. |
 lizxharrison chapter 15 . 1/25/2019 Hey, I'm enjoying this story, and I was wondering if you could finish it? Thanks:)) |
| ilikenougat chapter 15 . 10/21/2018 Hey, I was wondering if you could please finish this story. I really like it and I'm eager to see what happens next. |
| Guest chapter 15 . 7/1/2018 :) |
| Guest chapter 15 . 6/10/2018 please update! i need to hear more of this story! i need to know what happens |
| sodapoplover88 chapter 1 . 3/8/2018 Can you update |
| lanalight1 chapter 15 . 2/11/2018 NOOOOOOOOOOOOO! You CAN'T STOP HERE! |
| lanalight1 chapter 2 . 2/11/2018 My only critic is that this sounds way too modern. The things like "baby bro" and "awesome" don't seem to fit. Well I guess awesome may have been a word, but it's just weird having Darry say it. |
| Phoenixx Rising chapter 15 . 1/22/2018 Oh, that sucks, ponyboy panicking is so sad. I love two-bit in this chapter. |
| Phoenixx Rising chapter 14 . 1/22/2018 Yikes! Goodness, poor Pony. |
| Elizabeth chapter 14 . 10/13/2017 Please continue this story. I really like it, and I'm honestly really eager to see what happens next:)) |
| Angela Lynn Woodward chapter 14 . 9/13/2017 please keep going |
| Ponyboy Jo chapter 14 . 8/16/2017 Yes! I'm reading and enjoying it. Please continue. Thanks. Need to know when Soda is going to forgive his brother. |
| Soccerfan2014 chapter 14 . 8/13/2017 Great chapter! You have done an amazing job thus far, and I find myself getting sucked into this story more and more as the storyline progresses. You capture Ponyboy and his brothers' characters really well (Steve and Two-bit too.) At the same time, your originality really enhances the reading. Keep up the good work! |
| Phoenixx Rising chapter 13 . 8/13/2017 Yikes! How very selfish of Soda. Poor Darry and Pony. |
