I'm can wait to see what you do this story of reward and punishment.

I'll go with it, but when will u update again?

You know if you're not going to do anything with this you might as well delete it. Leaving it is simply spineless and inconsiderate towards the audience. If not, I suggest with a rewrite that Lona, or whatever you plan to rename her, could be actually a demon, or a vampire, or something in which she'd be more appealing. Because with what you have now, it's rather unclear what Sebastian sees in her.

Killer story. What's next? A kidnapping of your OC? A few answers to why her maybe? Please update

Really good story. Keep working on it. It'll be worth it. But perhaps you should do a chapter in your new one in which Sebastian truly shows he cares for your oc more than a concubine?

Go on ahead. You have the audience's full support. I'm reading this on the bus to school, but it seems really good. Please do something with it soon so it's not just sitting there.

It's a good story, but it could use some changes. Go on ahead.

Are you taking suggestions for your rewrite of rewards and punishments? If you are, I have a few. One is for a new name, that it perhaps be after some virgin saint. Ironic right?

Why's Sebastian so drawn to your oc? When you rewrite, can you please make that clear? Other than that, everything you plan to do will be fine. Just do it soon.

I believe this still has plenty of potential. Use it. No joke. Please do something with it soon. If not, then you're unworthy. Just kidding. But seriously. Do something

Please rewrite and reupload rewards and punishments. I'd really like to see what you do with it. Thank you

If you want to rewrite it go ahead, we'll still support you

I think you should rewrite it.

I wouldnt mind the change of her age or the school setting, i fact it would be a bit more exciting to have Sebastian as a professor instead. I d however suggest the OC gets a legitament(sp?) reason as to why the contract wa made other than her boyfiend cheating on her or s just wanting to get away, cause then that just controdicts te whole thing. This OC seems a lot like a Mary Sue character, ad though I dont mind it, sometimes it gets to the piont of being annoying. Other than that, I think you have a pretty good story on your hands! Cant wait for more!

I think you should rewrite this story so that she's in college and instead of calling ciel his nephew maybe you would consider calling him his son. I don't know why but I love the idea of them having a father son relationship since in the end he can't eat his soul.