This is a beautifully written piece. I've read it like five times. Good luck to you in this and future works, I look forward to reading more from you!

Hello! Absolutely LOVE YOUR STORY... Don't want to rush you or anything, but are you going to write a chapter 8?...

I really liked Annalise and Tintin's conversation in this chapter! Although the dialogue seemed a bit unrealistic a few times, the purpose that the conversation served was perfect; to allow them a moment to get to know each other. Plus, nice reference to AC/DC, right on! I imagined Hell's Bells playing as I read that... ;P Anyway, I hope that in the next chapter, we finally get to meet the rednecks! XD I will be staying tuned!

I've always wonderedabout tintins childhood, and Ive read many different versions. It's good he's found a friend in Annalise.

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Tintin, Captain Haddock and... Barbeque? Haha, CANT WAIT!

LOL! Tintin in America! Favorite line:"I've heard of tha' state. Alabama. Isn't that where those people called rednecks live?"

ROFL!

:O This chapter was SO GOOD! Wow. The beginning was positively bloodcurdling. Awesome! And cute description of Tintin on his 'investigation high', that's totally in his character! :3 Haha I laughed at the end line! XD Super excited for the next chapter where they finally get to meet the 'rednecks'! Update soon! ;D

YAY, a new chapter! :D Great dialogue, as always, and nice shower scene with Tintin... ;) it was very descriptive... *ahem* ANYWAY, I really like Annalise's character! Great chapter and I can't wait for what happens in the good old state of Alabama! ;D

The beginning scene...! *giggles like a little girl talking about elementary crushes and blushes* So well written! I love it! More!

That was an awesome chapter! The plot of your story is really intense and suspenseful, and I'm on the edge of my seat for what happens next. Your dialogue is brilliant, flowing, and very believable! I do have one big problem, though, so please excuse my rant; Tintin IS a reporter! All reporters are journalists, but not every journalist is a reporter and, subsequently, he is both. More to the point, Tintin was NEVER referred to as a journalist in any of the books, he was always a reporter. His title, that many fans use and Herge himself used, is 'boy reporter'. To say that he would correct people and tell them he is a "journalist, not a reporter" might sound good, but it's incorrect. Sorry if I kind of unloaded onto you there, but it's something I've run across in a couple other fanfics too and it really bothers me. Then again, maybe in your story Tintin is just a journalist and that's fine too. Anyway, great chapter and I can't wait for what happens next! :)

P.S.- Hahahaha I liked the 'lovechild of Indiana Jones and Sherlock Holmes' bit XP

OH MY GOODNESS! i'm sorry, i just can't get over how good your fan fiction is! O.O One thing, it seemed like kind of a big jump from when they decided to go on the trip to this chapter and I kind of feel like I missed something [It would've been interesting to hear Tintin and Annalise's phone conversation...]. Anyway, I'm SO into the plot, and I can't wait to see what happens next! :D

Tintin and Haddock are so amazingly in-character...wow. It's such a believable conversation between them. I'm excited for this story! :)

WOW. You are an amazing writer! You have Tintin's character perfect, and the dialogue is amazing! After such a gripping prologue, I knew that this was one of those fan fictions that just knock you off your feet. I can't wait for the next chapter!

This is Good!

I wanna hear more!

MORES!

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"WOAH! IT'S THE ONE!"