Reviews for Redeem Myself
Nokin chapter 1 . 10/9/2004
True, this could fit a number of characters, but I can think of one in particular it fits best.

That was a beautiful point you made and you made it so well! Although it has no surrouding description, because it's a sililoquy, you defined the character, his feelings, and possibly just short of his actions while he says it. Sweet.

My favorite part: the way you repeated the "It's so much harder to be 'good' than 'evil' paragraph. It really drove it home.

: Sililoquy-original & creative; deep; great characterization; you made a point.

-: Unspecific in who the character exactly is, but proves your original suggestion so it's not that bad.

Overall: 10/10
jansonpls chapter 1 . 10/9/2004
I love this so much... I can't work out who it is, though. Beelzebumon?

Bizarrely, it actually reminds me of a Star Wars book character more than any Digimon character. *hits self*

But it's very nice, introspective... I like it.
Adam chapter 1 . 2/20/2003
Short, but well-done. It would be nice to see a continuation of how Ken's views had changed later in the series. Oh, and please keep working on Chapter 4 of Kyoudai!
Seinaru Kibou no Tenshi chapter 1 . 11/7/2002
You're right that Toei recycles its characters, because this would work equally well for Ken or Kouichi or even "Lighter Guy" in Tamers. Anyway, this is a superb story, which works because it is so restrained and so insightful. Your prose is tight and controlled and it works well as a result.

In particular, this comment is so true: "It's so much harder to be 'good' than 'evil'. When you're evil, you don't need the approval of anyone or anything. You can do whatever you want, and you simply don't care about anything besides yourself. When you're good, you have to care. And that hurts so much, so much more than anything evil you do...to see the pain and fear on the faces of the people whom you love."
Goggle Girl chapter 1 . 6/1/2002
You're such an awesome writer Rb-sama! This was VERY weel-writter!

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You'll know eventually chapter 1 . 5/19/2002
Introspective? I like it. Although I'm not so sure Beelzebumon is given to such moments of profound-ness.
yami no hikari chapter 1 . 5/18/2002
digimon...digimon...i taking a wild guess, is it Beelzebumon talking?
Licht Sieger chapter 1 . 5/18/2002
Very nice. I'd assume this is Beelezbumon..?