Reviews for The Sin of Jealousy
anonymoususer123456789 chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
ASDFKHASLFKHS AMAZING IN EVERY WAY! MORE THOR FICS PLEASE!
ObsessiveFanNumber1 chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
Ahhh! Why didn't you tell me you wrote a Thor story, Terra? Or, more accurately, a Loki story? YOU KNOW LOKI IS MY FAVORITE!

*sniffles* This made me so sad. Loki-senpai...all he wanted was to be Thor's equal in the eyes of Odin. That's all! And because he never was, he shut off the part of his heart that seeked love from his father and tried to kill everyone, hoping it would fill that new emptiness. (*gasps* STORY IDEA!) It broke his sanity a little, too, I admit, but that's part of why I love him.

The part about Thor making mistakes, but only Loki getting punished, made me sniffle. It's true; Thor had no idea how to deal with getting sent to Midgard in the movie because that was really the first time anyone had ever punished him.

I think you got Loki's reaction to killing Fimafeng perfect, too. After all, we all saw his (slightly delayed) reaction when he thought Odin died after finding out he was Jotun.

Overall, I think it's perfect! You should write more "Thor" stories with Loki! *favs* And tell me when you do! Wait, never mind. *puts you on Author Alert (thought I did this when we met, but appparently not)* Okay, we're good! *thumbs up* Au revoir~
Heavenmetal chapter 1 . 3/6/2012
Nice! I loved your charterizations here. You should do the rest of the Lokisenna :D