Commander turns into an A-hole at the speed of light here.

Good story.

Great

Nice story

Liked this story, too!

Very in character! Love the jealousy! I've been hoping for some new Taylor/Wash smut that was sort of the rough/angry type; and you delivered! It's nice to see stories like this that suggest ways they first get together; that first encounter is what we've all been waiting to see! I think you could easily extend this another chapter or two.

WOW! That was sooooooo intense, so violent and sexy and so BAMF! I loved it!

O.O So... give me a moment to compose myself.

Damn... just...damn girl! Like... hot damn... This was... jesus. This was SO hot. Loved the jealousy, the fact they were playing poker and all it took was two words from Malcolm of all people to send Taylor into a jealousy frenzy. I loved it! And his anger and her trolling and the chip hitting his chest and then his dragging her over the table...my god. My frakken god, woman. It was so hot. And then their kiss and then their actions and his demanding he say her name after telling her he knew she touched herself and called out his name. Love. Just love. I love this. Excuse me, I need to read this again XD