Agradeço por ter escrito isso, sempre quis uma continuação.

Very good indeed. I noticed some errors along the way, but I can't remember all of them. Skimming through the chapters should be enough to find what's wrong. I hope the second one is as good if not better, because that's what I'm gonna read next. Congrats!

Great start. I see one error: beldam, which should have a capital "b". It isn't very often that I find nearly nothing wrong with someone's writing, and one error? That's something I'm not used to seeing. I think I'm really gonna like this fic.

This one was some kinda Percy Jackson-ish, but I still like it (Not that I don't like Percy Jackson series, I really enjoy them actually, but I don't know, Coraline fanfics have a different atmosphere maybe thats why...).

Whoa! LOVED IT! Coraline's attitude, Wybie losing himself, classic fake sweetness of Beldam...

Haha LOL. Exciting ending for the chapter btw.

Wow... I just freaked out! XD

I think Miranda might be the girl who has been kidnapped and now is Beldam's secret agent(not that I think its her fault, probably Beldam washed her brain).

I just love reading it... But I think one dream was enough (though second one was as scary as it too...)

I really enjoyed it! It will be one of my fav stories if it goes on like this. I wish it wasn't just a dream though XD. It would be more exciting then. Anyway, I'm still sure that this will happen in a really short time... :)

Good start. I actually like this. Very Interesting.

This is one of the best story's I've ever read!

I liked this Coraline fanfic

This story is awesome! It's very fast- pacing, and suspenseful. I honestly don't know what will happen next. By the way, I like the interesting concept you did with Wyborne having a crush on Coraline. I find that very cute. Anyways, very good story!

Hopefully the sequel will be good!