Wow.

Not at all what I expected.

Thank you for writing and posting.

Wish you’d carried this one.

ive had acid reflux since i was small it sucks ass

Excellent story

Please write another G!P Rachel story. Maybe one where Quinn is the nerd and Rachel is a popular player

Wow. What an adventure.
I can understand Quinn's point of view, but the fact remains that she robbed Rachel of her son for thirteen years, and that is something that cannot be given back.
Oh well, they'll figure it out.

Thank you for this wonderful story. See you soon.

TK

I absolutely love this story. It's realistic to my tastes and well written with only a few typos.

One question, though. I thought Rachel's parents were named Hiram and Leroy ? Did you perhaps begin to write this before you knew ? That would explain it.
Also, in an earlier chapter you introduced Gerard as 'Dr Gerard Way' and yet you made him a legal consultant here. Was it some kind of pun I didn't get because English isn't my native language, or is it simply an oversight from your part ?

Anyway, I can't wait to read more.

TK

Of course faberry is all about sadomasochism don't we all know it. And we shippers ship them for the angst. Quinn is a bully and a bitch and the prosthesis is her comeuppance. As for Rachel, her recompense is assured with Quinns guilt complex the rest of their lives. Sometime in the near future though, with advances in the kinesthetic aspects of virtual reality, life will be better for them in the bedroom. Microsurgery and transplant medicine will also have breakthroughs a few years later that the berry-fabrays will benefit from immensely.

13 years and Rachel didn't even try to find them? Yeah she must have waited for Quinn to come back on her own but that has to be the most un-Rachel thing ever. I get too that Quinn was too young to know better but she could have rectified things one or two years later. 13 years is just too long for suspension of disbelief. I liked this story though. I just discovered it and read everything in two days. I'd just think that Rachel chose to respect Quinn's lunacy and wait for it to pass. She wasn't counting on 13 years hence the fiance. Quinn was beyond embarrassed by her craziness and just waited for fate to do right by true love or whatever it was. Fate was naughty so made them suffer forever and their bittersweet reconciliation was marred by the fact that there wouldn't be marathon sex now or ever because the car accident left Rachel with a mangled beyond repair penis that had to be amputated. She was fitted with a prosthetic anyway but the first one was made of material that Quinn was allergic to and it took a few more months for another prosthetic to be sewed in what am I writing I'm crazier than Quinn. I guess I want to say that this story will stay with me for a long while and I'll imagine their blissful new prosthetic-enhanced togetherness for the next few weeks. Thank you for the story.

This chapters really messed up, the spelling is way off and there are random words and letters everywhere

Can you make a sequel?

This is such a great story.

This story my me cry so much

The way you end Catalyst need an epilogue. Rachel and Quinn deserves it. And what about Rachel and their child? I'm sorry if I sound demanding... it's just that the story is soooo good that I can't seem to let it go. Please just think about it?

Have you considered doing a sequel I spoke to know what happens after Rachel wakes up