This is very well done. Very accurate of what I imagine a married life of Francis and Arthur would be like. Very good

Really liked this :) Gah, it's so easy in almost-only-introspective short stories like this to get all run-on so that readers end up just skimming to get to the next actually interesting bit, that's always my problem- but you totally didn't! I didn't have any urge to skim over a single word. Difficult style very well written!

Damnit TT_TT I-I'm not crying, my eyes are sweating...I should not of read this while listening to Chopin's "Nocturne"! I was already choked up in the beginning, then my stupid Ipod starting playing that, and I was like "I will n-not cry! I w-won't do it!" (Three min. later) "TT_TT Wahhhhhhh! Stupid frog!"

I loved the emotion it it!

Another perfect story! I love this one! It's one of those that makes you really think and focus on the story.

So very good x_x.

So sad, and happy, and awesome. :D

Good job _

This was beautiful~ I wanted to cry with Arthur though, I feel bad for him... Great job~