The whole thing seems like a filler chapter.

...um, wow?
I forgot that this story existed for a very long time, and was pleasantly amazed to discover that I had followed it, and that there was more to it now. This was an amazing conclusion to an amazing story. You also somewhat resolved all of the heartbreak I had gone through over Alaric, (or at least over her not remembering...I'm still heartbroken), and did a really good job tying up some of the confusion of how things went wrong in Twilight despite Alice's gift...her perspective is one I've always wanted to see, so there's that. Plus Jasper. Quite possibly my favorite Twilight character, and you write him so well, and you build their relationship so well...it's amazing. All of it.
Thank you so much for your writing! I'm going to go cry in a corner now, after rereading all of this, but it was definitely worth it.

This was just posted but i felt like i read this ending before... maybe on another site? Hmmmm... i remember those words... "he loved me" they stuck with me.

Kept me up until midnight to finish it. Horrifyingly beautiful. I cried, I laughed, I shuddered a lot. You captured the spirit of vampire, the thirst for blood and the ghosts of a yesterday too far to remember. You have real talent for this. Keep typing!

Loved this story, wonderful imagining of Alice's earlier life, her transformation, her life waiting for Jasper and their time together before meeting up with the Cullen's.
Very impressed how the author managed to "show not tell" with Alice's future reading.
Lots of interesting ideas and I loved the interconnections between Alice's background and what we would after find out through the Twighlight series. See how many links you can pick up :)
Highly recommended.

I haven't actually read this yet...I just want to say that I am very much glad you are still around and writing. Now, to read it...

I am so glad to see this post. Glad you decided to finish. This was one of my fav's. They way you write needs to be applauded. Loved your story. 'Mostly' Reasonable decision making. (With the Exception of Maria's action a few chapters back. It seemed tactless of her to bring ppl she only semi-trust with her when she visited the Cullens. Especially in the 'safe' northern lands. She should have left some behind, under the guise of protecting their territory. It's not like they weren't replaceable. She seems to me to be a survivor. Never to overplay her hand or overextend herself. It was how she survived so long. I get she was desperate, but to me, that is when being a survivor, work best. But her decision to come with all she had, made no sense. Her initial visit should have been an intel gathering one, then she should've made that ph call, and promised to make it continuously till Jasper returns. Ensuring a life on the run for the Cullens. And all of this, should've been done through a messenger. Because that's how she would operate. Never putting herself in direct fire.) But hey, what 's done is done. And everything else was awwWWwwesommmme!

I guess, what is to follow is all CANON twilight now. And we all know how that ended. Super over the top HEA for Bella, while Edward and Rosalie gets a smell house permanent house guess thanks to a nonsensical imprint brainfart that SM had to make JB happy, so that his 'fans' and Bella would be fully happy too. SMH. Worse decision EvvvvEEERRRRRR!

Oh and tell me if im wrong here. Wasn't Aro decision to make all these reaching claims, kinda silly. Especially since he has the memory that JB and the Cullens told Charlie (The chief of police) 98% of the truth, in order for Bella to keep him in her life.(To add to the OTT H.E.A SM wanted for her) I mean, c'mon. As soon as JB brought him over, and they 'mostly' confessed what they were, I was like "Errp, they're boned." Because I thought when they had to go back to Italy and aro took Edwards hand it was going to be all the leverage he needed over them. But then all the other crap happened and the volts come to them instead, and I was like, I don't know WHYYY you're gathering all these friends to stand with your guilty bums... Just because Rensemee is not an immortal child, doesn't mean, her never shoulda been boyfriend didn't already implicate the whole family in a crime, and broke the law. So imagine how upset I was when SM added that to all the 'laws' of her universe, she REVERSED/Ignored in order to make Bella's and Team Jacob fan H.E.A work. Imagine how much it sucked for Charlies knowledge, to not even be MENTIONED. Aro could've won the day with that alone. Most of Carlise's allies would have abandoned them because they did IN FACT break the law.

And just because he was marrying SUE is not an excuse to overlook this. Aro wanted them dead, and the wolves aren't part of his Jurisdiction. He wanted them dead too. (after they picked thier side) So, that whole ending was nonsensical crap.

Sorry to vent, but DAMN! Was I the only who read that book and was like. "COME ON, REALLY?!"

SMGDH.

This was quite pleasant to read. A lovely version of their meeting and also quite in character. Chapeau!

I'm here having serious with drawl from the twilight series and oh my life these stories are amazing. they are tugging on my heartstrings in indescribable ways. Keep going! You've reached me in England!

Oh please... SHe has NOOOO memory. SHE RE-MEM-BERS NOT-THING about her human life, or humanity. What does she have to feel 'guilty' over? From what I can tell, the only reason for that guilt is how she was written.

At least Anne Rice's LOUIE had an excuse.

I just want to say this is one of the best fanfics I've ever read and I've read tons, you are truly gifted and I hope one day I can purchase your novels, hell Id purchase a cookbook of you wrote it! I wish you the best of luck.

This...Made. Me. Cry.
Powerful stuff, hon. You should write professionally

I wish this wasn't done! I'm sorry, that I haven't left any reviews at all! I mostly read a night, and had to go to bed rather than review.
Very unique! You have some creative ideas that I've absolutely never heard before. And it's so well written it was easy to read. I was really caught up in your story!
It took me a little bit to get used to, but then I really liked the alternation between timelines. I very much like it that you came full circle, so at the end of the last chapter I could go back to the first chapter, and find out what happened to Alice next.
Thank you for such an enjoyable read!

Nice, you put so much action in just these past 2 or 4 paragraphs. Great job, but I wished there was more action. Never the less. Gr8 Job writing alice. Everyone has her as this worm, who only cares about fashion. But there is so much more To these characters. But all anyone ever really concentrates on is smut.

I already read this on Twilighted. net I was great. I will probably be re-reading it once more. You did a FANSTATIC job with Alice.