Noooo! What a sad ending :'( Poor Nagi, Rima's being a real bitch towards his feelings, although I understand how Valentine's day would affect her and how her parents behave... A very good first chapter!

ARRRRRRGAAAAWAAAAAAAAHHHHH! THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME! PLEASE CONTINUE TO UPLOAD

AWWW THIS STORY WAS SO CUTE AND FLUFFY I CAN'T EVEN DESCRIBE :):):):):):):):):) I'M LIKE SO HAPPY RIGHT NOW! this was an amazing story and I loved it 3

Omgeee! Soooo much perfect fluffinesss! Plz update!

lol I love how Rhythm says "... in a whole different light..."

K sorry stupid iPod posted I meant the best part was when yaya was like IT WAS THE BEST THING IN THE WORLD EXCEPT FOR CANDY AND COOKIES AND PANDAS AND KAIRI-KUN lol hilarious love it! I love how well u moved things along not rushed and to slow! I do think being in the hospital twice was a little predictable and the car accident and the beating should have switched time frames at least cause I think u shud be in the hospital knocked out longer from the car accident then the beating but oh well loved it still! 33333::

One of my fav rimahiko stories! 3 best part was when yaya was l

Oh, no! It's over! Aww!

Rima and Nagihiko are sooo effin' cute! So, if Nagi doesn't want to dance like a pro anymore, does that mean that Temari will disappear? o.O

Aww! The Kusu-kusu-barely-coming-out-of-her-egg scene really got me. That was so beautiful how she stuck with Rima til the end.

["I was letting everything sync in."] I think you meant 'sink'. Sync is occuring at the same time while 'sink in' is: to enter or permeate the mind; become known or understood (usually followed by in or into ). Example: He said it four times before the words really sank in. (copy-pasted from dictionary dot com) :)

I took notice that you say 'tears fell down her face' or some sort like that throughout your story. I suggest describing it differently each time. I'm not very good at description, but I'll give you some short examples: shed tears, tears cascaded down, she weeped, she whimpered, snivel, etc.

When I cry I usually sniffle and my nose gets all red, so try adding that in crying scenes. Remember, you want to make it as real as possible and help the readers paint a picture in their head.

If you ever need any more synonyms, use thesaurus dot com. It's SOOOO helpful! If you enter the word 'cry', it will give you several results that you can use in your stories. I use it all the time! And you might learn a new word everytime you use it. I know I do. :D

Anyways, I hope I helped. Overall, I really loved this story. Most of the time, I read Romance/Humor. I rarely read some melancholic one, but when I do, they turn out great, and I am happy to say that yours was one of them. Great job!

-BuBuBoom

Oh, the fluff! I love it!

Well Ikuto was awfully nice in this chapter. :)

And they kissed! Woooo! :D

Favorite lines:
1. ["I have a girlfriend." Nagihiko muttered] Aww! Too cute!

2. ["Why are you so nervous? Are you going to sleep with her?"] Gotta love Rhythm. XD

O.O
Intense chapter!

So they're still in elementary school? NO! I don't want Nagi to leave! He's such a good guy. Why can't all guys be like him? LOL! If Rima won't take him, I will! ;D

Favorite line: [Rima knew she was in love with Nagihiko Fujisaki.] Aww! :D

I also want to say good job for not going with the whole cliché person-loses-memories-so-now-we're-going-on-this-long-adventure-that-will-take-us-ten-chapters-to-get-her-memory-back. LOL! I applaud you.

And poor Rima, first Kusu-kusu and now her mother. Sad. :(

Dramarama!

Poor Rima, but I feel worse for Nagi. Having to see the girl he's in love with on a hospital bed sucks! And now she has memory loss?! Uh-oh!

Btw, I feel like I'm spamming you with these reviews. LOL! But I usually like to review every chapter of a story... unless I'm really lazy, but I'm not right now. :D

Alright! Second chapter!

["RIMA-TAN, CAN YOU BELIEVE THAT SOMEONE DENIED NAGI-TAN'S CONFESSION ON VALENTINE'S DAY?"] OOOOH! Oh, Yaya... Dang, my jaw dropped when I read that! Wow, his life can't any worse can it?

Ha! Amu doesn't know about the whole cross-dressing thing yet? That's funny!

[She forced a glance at Nagihiko as Nikaidou read the note.] Umm... did you mean Tsukasa instead of Nikaidou?

Well, I think you did a great job with this chapter. The only grammar errors I see are dialogue punctuation, but I already told you about that in your other story. :)

I didn't see any spelling errors, and you keep them in-character. :D

I also noticed that you use 'whispered' a lot. You should try changing it up a bit. Try using: spoke softly, barely uttered, murmured, said in a low voice that only Nagihiko can hear, etc. :D

This story has caught my attention for a while now, but I never had the time to read. :(
But here I am!

[They had not smiled in years. Rima couldn't remember what a smile looked on either one of their faces.] Aw, that's really sad. I feel bad for her. :(

[Rima took hers, and didn't say anything.] Ha! I bet she's fangirling inside. :D

[Since Nikaidou was running late, they had to wait outside.] LOL! Why is it that Nikaidou is always late to class? XD

Ouch, I can't believe Rima said that. No wait, yes I can. LOL!

Poor Nagi. I'm hoping for a happy Rimahiko ending. :D

Favorite line: ["C'mon Nagi; you're cool and hot and I could see any girl falling for you!"] LOL! I totally cracked up when I read that! Because it's true! XD

So far, I like it! :D

KAWAII cx

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw thts so fluffy :) i loved it plz continue