That was really cool theres not enough good halo 2 fanfictions that ive found this great the accuracy if it keeping it realistic that was cool.

An interesting premise.

Really well written story, felt like It was something the designer would right to set the mood and story fro the game. Loved it! :D

Nice! (: I like how you depicted Master Chief, hehe. And Cortana too, she's such a nice brat, ahahaha! *w* Nice innocent realtionship, they have (here). Nice ficlet. Kudos!