The plot is really interesting I hope you will update the story

Nice.. Keep it up

A gr8 chapter. Cannot wait for the next. Ash and Misty 4ever.

Interesting story, although it still requires some editing. Good luck. Would like to read more.

Just in case-

pikapi ash

pikachupi misty

Where is Ash and the others? Poor Misty they tide her up and a stranger help her. Man, where's ash where you need him? Anyway love the story

I came across your story, and let me tell you that I love it. Oh dear, hope nothin bad happens to misty. Misty and Ash, like, 4 eva

interesting. i'd love to see more.

Good for Eevee and Azurill. Hopefully they can help Misty out along with this Jack person. Can't wait to learn more about this special aura she has - and what Team Plasma is up to. Thanks for the update!

Good Chapter. Looking 4ward 2 more. Ash and Misty 4ever.

This is a gr8 story. i hope Ash comes to the rescue. Ash and Misty 4ever. :)

good story start just a couple of problems with spelling apart from that it's good