Omg so good! I just imagined Ghira’s expression as he fingered himself!

FUCK YOU, this should of had Hitmonlee in it!

OOH! Ghirahim is so SASSY! I just LOVE this!

O_O
Link...Bad Boy.

Ahaha this is amazing! I'm sad this is just a one-shot, you could write more I'm sure it'd be just as good as this! 3

Oh wow this reminds me of the end of the house of night novel chosen. Wow here's why:
Characters involved I the end:

Zoey: main character heroin like.

Loren Blake: bad guy enemy, enemy's helper like person

Erik: zoeys bf

Basically what happened was that zoey made a mistake of doing it with Loren Blake she didn't mean for it to happen but it just did. And instead of using her time to celebrate her bf turning into a full vampyre she wasted her time "fucking the enemy"

Oooh, I really liked the ending! That sly old Girahim ;)

OMG ohhhh is ecelent histori god :D

... just as planned.

Wait till Zelda hears about this xD Link will become nonexistent after that!

Oh, God, I would -pay- you to write another to this. Honest to God. Anything you want, yours.

O.O Wow...

I've never read a link topping fanfic before,

I suprisingly liked it a lot _

I am happy that you didn't make Ghirahim OOC even though he was bottom, you did an exalent job with keeping them all in character 3

I liked it. :) It's nice that Link actually wanted it. Is this a one shot or a chapter fic? It would be interesting to see Link's emotional reactions as he realizes that he is falling for the enemy even more. I also would love to see Zelda's she finds out. Do you have a beta reader? I think having one would help with some of the spelling errors, though there wasn't that many of them.