Awwwwwwww! 89 words of FULL FLUFF! XD

So I clicked on this fanfiction.

And I read it.

The format was really annoying.

And there was no story.

Or proper sentence structure for that matter.

You know, things like quotation marks.

Or paragraphs.

So I left a review.

Better luck next time.

awwww :) this is very fluffy :)

very cute, for just talking. would have liked to see a litle more.

Cute. What else I can say

It is with regret that I note how you are a writer with potential of becoming an author. To begin, write using conventional story format. Pace yourself throughout the story, using details as filler between significant points. Replace dialogue with thoughts and actions; thoughts delve into character depth while actions become transitions from point A to point B. Add sensory details by making note of the menial. Envision your story and describe what you see with clarity, not excessiveness. I look forward to your future work!

Respectfully,

Silent Sentimentality