Nooooo ! Why did he stop?

I cracked up about the woman’s age thing in this chapter, because I could just imagine Sherlock having a devil of a time figuring out my age. I look nearly 15-17 years younger than I am, and I never give away my age, only tell them ‘thank you for the compliment’ and grin at them. I find it funny other people seem to have a hard time figuring out my age. Though if they do manage to get it right I have no problem saying so. But if someone is like Sherlock that relies on the typical female reaction of correcting an over or under estimation to finding there real age, they would be out of luck with me. lol which made the whole scenario funny.

Well, I'm back reading the story. Again. Every year it seems I return. :) Love it.

Thanks for writing! I so enjoyed this beautifully written story and characters. I love the detail and depth of love.

This chapter has to be one of the most erotic pieces of literature I've read in a LONG time. It's impressive because I have read hundreds of hardcore stuff, but the diction here is just 10/10
You have a talent, I can assure you that! Thank you!

Brilliant

Wow, this story is really amazing. I’ve read 100s of fics, and I think it would be fair to say this is probably in the top 5 most well written ones I’ve ever read. Not to mention it’s alluring and suspenseful and true to character and just an all around fantastic read. I think it’s progressing at the perfect pace, not rushed but not too slow, perfect control, and your dialogue is still spot on. I am thoroughly enjoying it!

You do an extremely impressive job with your dialogue choices. Sherlock seems incredibly authentic, you’ve done quite the job figuring out what he would say in these situations. Very impressive.

Damn. Certainly the sexiest kiss I’ve ever read. Nicely done.

What A lovely story. Thank you for writing!

Ahhhh heartwrenchingly warm and...sexy. You’re quickly becoming one of my very faves. Your characterization is perfectly spot on every time.

I think this is the most realistic fic i have ever read. the dialogue, the reactions, the body language... The snappy remarks, the internal turmoil, it's like the script itself. I really mean it, i read some great stories, but for me this is the one that feels like the series and the characters. Absolutely fantastic.

I'm reviewing this story after I've read it. Its rare to see characters written so well that you can picture, feel and understand every action they portray. The way you write Sherlock, which is a very difficult character to write, is near to as perfect as Benedict would have written him himself. Keep writing, every aspect of this fanfiction is incredible.
~Chess

Thanks for the well written story! I could barely put it down!

I loved it! Great story! I liked how you portrayed Sherlock's transition from the false sociopath to a man in a loving relationship. All the internal conflicts, the uncertainty... A great work!